Recent Comments

11/23/25, 8:28 PM
He should just tell the Mom at this point. Hot story, but why would he not tell her or hate his Dad for this wildness haha
11/23/25, 12:04 PM
Incredible work!

11/23/25, 12:18 PM
@[Dace](/user/show/1217645) Thank you! I’m actually in the process of writing a follow up, so I hope you read and enjoy that one too when it gets posted.
Anonymous
11/23/25, 7:33 AM
This was amazing!

11/23/25, 11:23 AM
@Anonymous I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!
11/17/25, 10:57 PM
Hot story, but it's tough to root for rapists. I hope Drew and Travis get revenge.

11/21/25, 3:06 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I agree with you)

11/21/25, 4:18 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) chapter 3 will be also dark but only spoiler I can give is chapter 4 will be named " rise and fall of the idiots " which will be about ramirez's and o'malley's back story , their games and where they end up and how they end up there . for the studio I am planing to take them down eventually but I think this story will be 10 chapters so before the dawn there will be some more darkness . new marines , new events , threats , obedience , defiance and sun rise .

11/22/25, 9:44 PM
@[Hypnoboy-7](/user/show/10055892) Thanks for shedding light on where this story is going! I look forward to seeing how it unfolds.
11/22/25, 6:28 PM
this got very sexy and hot at the end
Anonymous
11/22/25, 8:32 AM
Loved this it was both hot and funny
Anonymous
11/21/25, 5:32 PM
Hilarious! 🤣
supaboivsvillain
11/19/25, 8:58 PM
Congrats, Lucas-- this story/series is becoming my FAVORITE of 2025!:fireworks: Every chapter is riveting and I'm especially enjoying these latest chapters, 'Sticky' & 'Reset'!! If I had grown up with a character like Noah in my life, I would be a completely different person today.... (and I'm not sure if that's a good or a bad thing!) LMAO...:fire: The way you skillfully peel the layers of Liam's submission back chapter-by-chapter....it's quite GENIUS! Looking forward 2 the next chapters!! BRAVO & THANK YOU!!!:firecracker:

11/21/25, 5:12 PM
@supaboivsvillain dude thank u sm, im blushing over here lmao. glad youre into it my man
11/21/25, 8:17 AM
Masterfully written. Strong and sexy domineering and hopeless surrender. Thanks. šŸ”„šŸ”„šŸ”„

11/21/25, 5:11 PM
@[Toto27](/user/show/10051657) my pleasure man
11/14/25, 3:03 PM
Hope there is more.

11/15/25, 2:19 AM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) Part 2 " The Breaking " is coming in 16th November !

11/20/25, 12:26 PM
@[Hypnoboy-7](/user/show/10055892) A good story with great potential. I'd like to know more about how the other studio members ended up there and began working with the director? Especially about the big Russian? Was he lured in like Drew? Or were other methods used? I'd like to know more about how you'll develop the other studio characters and how they ended up in the story.

11/21/25, 4:28 PM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) oh no in my mind Russian is a sadistic asshole who enjoys what he is doing . he is getting paid . maybe he run from Russia because he is gay and a shitty person so got trouble in Russia so when he got job offer from director . living in America , breaking straight american marines and get paid for it . of course he liked the idea . we will see him again in story but don't know what I am going to do with him yet . about the other characters , hmmm chapter 4 will be about ramirez and o'malley's back story . I want to bring more characters in , some characters will develop every well while others will be side characters . I don't think I will focus on director body guards .