Recent Comments

3/27/24, 9:18 AM
Hot af so far, Definitely looking forward to any updates you do for the story! Not sure how long the story is, but can make a table of contentt for all the cards thats effecting the players, to help the readers keep things straight.

3/27/24, 3:00 PM
@[Speed99](/user/show/909251) I will make a table of content, right now I've got a few cards written down. I won't make an online list right now 'cause there isn't much, but I will make one when the time is right. Thank you for the feedback :)
3/27/24, 2:46 PM
Definitely want to see more!
3/27/24, 1:36 PM
Would love to read more . Seems hot!
R P
3/27/24, 1:08 PM
This is hilarious and hot
Anonymous
3/27/24, 10:57 AM
Oh this is going to be a good series!! Canโ€™t wait for more.
3/27/24, 10:57 AM
I would love to see more, if you don't mind
3/27/24, 6:57 AM
Fun story. You've got a great ear for dialogue
3/27/24, 4:02 AM
Ooh this is a very interesting but also Hot story. I never thought a manuscript style story would be this so hot.

3/27/24, 4:08 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thanks! I liked the idea of seeing what I could do without any visuals.
Dec 25, 2021
3/26/24, 10:44 PM
What a beautiful, and hot, Christmas story!
Mar 24, 2024
Muscle-Flex
3/25/24, 7:42 PM
Dropping us right into a mystery! This will be fun. I couldn't quite picture the full situation the narrator and Ben are in (lying on the floor, wrists and ankles bound?) Seductive start! I can't wait to see what game the captor has in store, who this amusingly fiendish dude is, and what his plans are for our three rugby studs. ๐Ÿ‰๐Ÿ’ช