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4/3/24, 3:14 AM
I like how this is a community story but nobody is adding to it.
4/2/24, 9:27 PM
What a fucking amazing story. The scene how Brad totally surrenders to his new craving being a slut is simply priceless. Thank you so much for the perfect time I had reading this chapter!
4/2/24, 3:54 PM
Tengo una duda que espero me puedan responder, en cuestión de desarrollo de personajes, o personalidades cual les gusta más, se que no es que sean los personajes más distintivos pero en lo que hay cual les gusta más, en cualquier aspecto, personalidad, trasero, polla, historia... :penguin:
4/2/24, 3:50 PM
Cualquier idea que tengan puede hacérmela saber, recomendaciones, expectativas, dudas, recuerden que sino quieren que les conteste al final colocan un "*". Entre todo me gustaría saber que piensa de la ":shit:" que se hablo en la entrevistacon Asher, depende de sus comentarios si lo implemento o no, también puede que sea una historia aparte, de cualquier forma los estaré leyendo gracias siempre :heart:
4/2/24, 3:46 PM
Aquí en la zona de comentarios tu mensaje será bien cuidado, las nalgas competitivas de Ben "sujetarán" cada comentario, entre más largo sea el comentario más adentro de ese agujero tendrá que entrar, así no se le escapara nada, ¿no es así Ben? :love_letter: R: Ummm si... ¡YO OBTENDRÉ LA VICTORIA, ABRAN ESE CULO CHICOS! :peach:
4/1/24, 6:52 PM
Great work. Loving this series.
3/30/24, 10:27 AM
Hey dude, this is a nice story, but the amount of basic spelling and grammar mistakes that popped up on the first page.. kinda showed that while you might be passionate about this, there's a lack of attention to detail. That makes the story feel like a rushed out the door, never looked at again draft rather than a sexy work of erotic fiction. And when authors don't do basic checks, it lessens the impact of the writing, takes away the passion and main point of the writing. None of this is meant to be discouraging: run this through a spell checker just once and there's a bunch of small, easily corrected mistakes. Incredibly useful tools are available to all authors, especially if English is not the authors native language. > masterbaiting while smelling his underwear masturbating > feeling ashaed ashamed > stoping his feet on the ground in anger. stomping > Moreover, if that wasn’t enough embarrassing, embarrassing enough > Not only you like to smell Not only do you

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4/1/24, 3:37 PM
Thank you, I have revised a lot of the mistakes, and i have made some minor changes for better experience. They will be available within 48 hrs after my edit is allowed to proceed. Please read once more and share any other ideas i can use for my future work. @[Nipstug](/user/show/10023878)
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4/1/24, 3:36 PM
Hello, Author here.Thank you for reading this and please excuse some of my mistake as I’m still new to writing and English isn’t my first language. (I have revised a lot of them, if you find anymore please leave a comment) Im hoping to continue this with 2 or more stories (one about divulging into the past when they first met). Please suggest some kinks/fetishes that you would like them to do. That’s it, peace out
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3/31/24, 6:06 PM
I love how Mike is slowly becoming a whore and still dominates his friends :yum:

4/1/24, 2:25 AM
@Anonymous Mike is a great captain both on the field and in bed. But her fat ass make it inevitable to want to eat those buns :tongue: :peach:
3/31/24, 7:50 PM
I echo the other commenters thoughts. This is becoming my favorite. Its blending hot and sexy and well written story into one. And i also am a sucker for good or happy ending. But a bad ending makes me curious too. Its your choice on how you will post the branching finale but im looking forward to read all the remaining chapters.