Recent Comments

John
4/12/24, 2:59 AM
Choice please. I would love to see him request Kal change his orientation after he transfers back. He's obviously unhappy with the life he was living.
4/11/24, 2:54 PM
I prefer a third option: Experiences Maketh the Man as it encompasses both your mistakes and choices. It will also allow Brad to get the ending he _deserves_!

Sss
4/11/24, 11:44 PM
@[QuinnDnvr](/user/show/13929) ^
4/10/24, 8:18 PM
I'll vote for choice. And even better: I vote that you create two separate pathes! This story is growing from being hot to becoming absolutely amazing. You even manage to add some unexpected depth I've never expected!

Sss
4/11/24, 11:44 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) ^
4/11/24, 7:45 PM
Excellent series. The fact that you had me rooting *against* a transformation into a bimbo femboy is a testament to your writing! But maybe Brad can keep that version of himself around for later 👀 Mistakes sounds more fun!
4/11/24, 3:45 PM
Choices maketh the man. The choice to accept ones mistakes and learn from them, to choose to be better.
4/11/24, 3:28 PM
Well, I hadn’t considered a “Door #3” option. But I guess it’s up to what’s behind #1 & #2. Lol. Can’t wait.
Anonymous
4/11/24, 2:22 PM
I wrote a longer comment that got eaten by the void so all I'm going to say is Holy fuck. Both endings please, and a third secret ending you havent even hinted at, please and thank you
eagerboy415
4/11/24, 1:55 PM
Team mistakes here. One final pitfall Brad can’t escape
Anonymous
4/11/24, 7:03 AM
I love this story! Very well-written, and loved that we got to delve more into the lore of magic in this reality. Im definitely glad brad came out on top, but would loved to have seen drake messing with brad more (making him unable to think about other things and even more physical transformations in order to show the boundaries of the power and extent to which drake had over brad...like, definitely want to see the big-titted barbie and straight versions of brad/kal come out, as well as others).
4/11/24, 4:15 AM
I just woke up so forgive me for the dumb humor, but it could be funny if "mistakes" refer to us, the readers. Like we'll receive a very short nonsensical paragraph, in a CYOA Goosebumps style. In more seriousness, I think it would be cool if you use the diverging plot tool and let us see both options. Only if you have the time/will for that of course.