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4/12/24, 8:21 PM
Wait. Doesn't Brad need to go suck Leo's cock before seeking out Ethan? His own curse is still in effect on himself. He still cannot refuse a proffered cock. Additionally, I would like to say that the writing is uber hot, the world building is very well done, and the characters are well developed. This is a fun series to jerk off to. As for choice or mistakes, I think you might need to write two different endings. Does magic in this universe allow for the creation of alternate timelines?

4/12/24, 8:44 PM
@[ControlMe](/user/show/2615973) To start with the last point, both endings are written and scheduled to release on 4/15, so stay tuned. As many people have pointed out, 'mistakes' and 'choices' are almost a mirror of each other, and perspective matters quite a bit as to which is which and which matters more. To address your first point, yes. Leo's cock is first on Brad's agenda in both endings, but Leo gets a slightly longer cameo in one branch than the other. And Brad's curse is still in effect and might end up being pretty important, depending on your... choice... as to which ending to read. And which one to interpret as real. I'm not going to say which ending I think is the 'real' one, or even if there are alternate timelines. That's up to you guys. Edit: I greatly appreciate the comments and support from everyone. This was always intended to be the way it ended. I initially wrote a broad outline of 3 chapters, with chapter 3 being split into 3a and 3b, but as I wrote the characters, I also found I wanted to spend more time with them, so I expanded from 3 chapters to 8, and it was pretty easy to just map them (mostly) to the days of the week the Body Swap spell was in effect.
Anonymous
4/12/24, 2:25 PM
This was amazing lol
4/12/24, 6:06 AM
Is there going to be more to this story?
4/12/24, 5:01 AM
new chapter!
John
4/12/24, 2:59 AM
Choice please. I would love to see him request Kal change his orientation after he transfers back. He's obviously unhappy with the life he was living.
4/11/24, 2:54 PM
I prefer a third option: Experiences Maketh the Man as it encompasses both your mistakes and choices. It will also allow Brad to get the ending he _deserves_!

Sss
4/11/24, 11:44 PM
@[QuinnDnvr](/user/show/13929) ^
4/10/24, 8:18 PM
I'll vote for choice. And even better: I vote that you create two separate pathes! This story is growing from being hot to becoming absolutely amazing. You even manage to add some unexpected depth I've never expected!

Sss
4/11/24, 11:44 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) ^
4/11/24, 7:45 PM
Excellent series. The fact that you had me rooting *against* a transformation into a bimbo femboy is a testament to your writing! But maybe Brad can keep that version of himself around for later 👀 Mistakes sounds more fun!
4/11/24, 3:45 PM
Choices maketh the man. The choice to accept ones mistakes and learn from them, to choose to be better.
4/11/24, 3:28 PM
Well, I hadn’t considered a “Door #3” option. But I guess it’s up to what’s behind #1 & #2. Lol. Can’t wait.