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Anonym
5/18/24, 5:32 PM
OH THAT'S SUCH A GOOD STORY!! Love how you've written it, love that Blake has a conscience and I love that they get a happy ending. Amazing story. I will definetly be re-reading that one in the future.

5/19/24, 12:13 PM
@[Anonym](/user/show/1317836) Thank you! To be honest, I’m not sure he actually did develop a conscience - he didn’t actually let them go, after all. I suspect it’s more likely he was just scared about the depth of his feelings for Trent and the fact that he didn’t think they would be returned, and so pushed him away and then rationalised his behaviour by saying that it was him trying to do “the right thing”. If you’d prefer to think he has a conscience you can - once it’s published, it’s out for all to interpret.
5/19/24, 10:23 AM
You are one of the best new writers on the site.:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: This was super-well written and super-sexy. I was worried about the romance aspect when the guy started as an hypnotized slave, but you really managed to make it work and belivable those two fell in love. :green_heart:

5/19/24, 12:08 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thank you! To be honest, I didn’t approach it thinking that it would be romantic - right up until the third scene I honestly thought it was going somewhere totally different, but the characters disagreed, I guess 😂
Limbo
5/19/24, 10:44 AM
Such a wonderful story. I hope you keep making stories like this and the other story you did, "Many Names, One Name". I love how you characterize each individuals in the story.
5/19/24, 7:51 AM
Another great story! The way you write the slaves is amazing. I love how they justify what’s been done to them. I’m a fan already and hope you write more!
5/19/24, 2:56 AM
Oh wow, i did not expect to love this story but i did. I love that Brent have his Himbos their own personality even though they are his hypnotized himbos. Hope this story have continuation.
5/19/24, 1:08 AM
Very hot! Really enjoyed that! Thank you for writing <3
5/18/24, 2:43 PM
This is so well written omg. The house, the sex, the magic system. You are an awesome writer and please keep it up!
May 18, 2024
5/18/24, 6:53 AM
As great as ever.
5/18/24, 6:33 AM
it get's hotter and hotter! keep going on
5/18/24, 1:19 AM
I love this chapter. The mythology mixed with the hypersexuality of the Coins and Jasper getting some level of balance with the conflict in him of obeying the implanted programming while also being himself pleases Rhys. That's a powerful moment to read. Also, hot sex and Jasper flipping the script to surprise a few Coins and delight all of them. He's so charming. Nova's counterpoint by providing, essentially, Jasper's old perspective is also wonderfully weaved in to add a tension and dynamic that feels three dimensional. Even we aren't sure just how much of this new life is really Jasper anymore. But, I think his feelings for Rhys are real so I am hanging out for a compromise between who he was and his old life and friends and who he is becoming. Also, having the Golden Lattice as an actual game to play is super cool! Another magnificent chapter re-worked into an even tighter well-paced piece of character, horniness, and plot. <3