Recent Comments

4/16/24, 12:20 AM
Such an amazing story. Both endings were hot, but yeah, I liked Brad’s happiness in this ending best. I just hate saying goodbye to these characters, even the (slightly) improved Kal. Lol.
Anon
4/16/24, 12:09 AM
I rather the mistake ending. This one is too sweet. Mistakes gets all the hot hypno stuff plus Drake also get mind fucked for a while. It's a shame Karl doesn't keep him around as a pet though, but for the sake of plot consistency he had to leave I guess
Anonymous
4/15/24, 8:07 PM
Ow. This ending hurt. It was also quite hot at parts, a testament to good writing. Will be revisiting this story a lot

Anonymous
4/15/24, 8:08 PM
Gotta wonder how Ethan would react if he ever came by to check on things. A potential epilogue, perhaps?
4/15/24, 6:25 PM
This is the first ending i read and im guessing this is the bad choice ending. I mean its alright that Brad stayed gay but its only for Kal though. I guess this is the good ending for Kal, he can become a straight warlock so that he could have a child. And i still hate Drake, too bad Brad removed the turned on torture curse. He should have it even after Kal made him go away. He needs to suffer and not to use his gigantic magical schlong. I might wait a bit before i read ending two. I need to digest this a little bit. But all i can say this is a nice tragic ending for Brad.
Anonymous
4/15/24, 6:09 PM
I think I prefer this ending, but both of them were hot. Thank you for this story
Ty Bond
4/15/24, 5:31 PM
Great story I hope you come back to the bar and characters
This Can't Be Happening
4/15/24, 3:47 AM
I love that the store owner is just like (quietly) "what the fuck, what the fuck, what the fuuuuuuuck"

4/15/24, 1:18 PM
@This Can't Be Happening Thank you!
TheAuthor
4/15/24, 1:03 PM
This was great. I like how you kept it simple all throughout. I appreciate stories that go exactly where you expect them to go. Good job!

4/15/24, 1:17 PM
@[TheAuthor](/user/show/678335) I appreciate your feedback very much. Thanks.
Anonymous
4/15/24, 10:03 AM
I love the story about father and son in relationships very much. I hope you can write more about it. Changing the age and body is also good.

4/15/24, 12:25 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! I love father son relations very much too. You can find more about it in two of my stories: Testos Legacy and Family bonds from the stars.
4/15/24, 3:12 AM
What a pity! This series don't move forward. Easily one of my favorites from recent years. I hope Iriefall returns this series someday.