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Ty Bond
4/16/24, 4:14 PM
I read this while in a chastity cage I actually leaked in it just reading your story, I wish there was a ratting above 5 stars. Thank you Master writer.
Anonymous
4/16/24, 11:28 AM
An excellent way to tie up the story! Very much enjoyed it and almost want to know whats happening with Kal now. Still, very much enjoyed this chapter!
R P
4/16/24, 10:41 AM
What a great series - definitely one of my new favourites!
John
4/16/24, 6:53 AM
Thank you so much for this ending
4/16/24, 3:41 AM
Awww. What a cute ending. I prefer this throuple ending. And even Kal gets a somewhat happy ending, thanks to Brad. I was just hoping the sex scene we got for this chapter is with Brads actual body and not just a magically transformed Kal. Its also interesting that Brad wished to be a versed-bottom, rather than just an actual verse. I guess that week long bottom experience stayed with him. Also, its interesting that both endings have Brad ended up being owned by someone. I guess thats what Brad needed, someone to own him. Enjoyed reading this series and hope to read more stories from you.
4/16/24, 2:43 AM
Great work on this whole story! I really love how, whichever way things go down, Brad and Kal both end up satisfied, if not exactly happy, with the outcome. Both endings feel equally true to the story as a whole, which is really impressive!
Sss
4/16/24, 12:55 AM
Definitely prefer this ending. I also love the aesthetic of the magic.
4/16/24, 12:20 AM
Such an amazing story. Both endings were hot, but yeah, I liked Brad’s happiness in this ending best. I just hate saying goodbye to these characters, even the (slightly) improved Kal. Lol.
Anon
4/16/24, 12:09 AM
I rather the mistake ending. This one is too sweet. Mistakes gets all the hot hypno stuff plus Drake also get mind fucked for a while. It's a shame Karl doesn't keep him around as a pet though, but for the sake of plot consistency he had to leave I guess
Anonymous
4/15/24, 8:07 PM
Ow. This ending hurt. It was also quite hot at parts, a testament to good writing. Will be revisiting this story a lot

Anonymous
4/15/24, 8:08 PM
Gotta wonder how Ethan would react if he ever came by to check on things. A potential epilogue, perhaps?