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4/16/24, 7:36 PM
Incredible series. But, I want to point out that there is still room for more in this thread. The choices thread tied up nicely, but there is further potential for this storyline. How does Ethan respond when he learns that Brad is Kal's complete slave? Can Kal be persuaded to set Brad free? Is a free Brad sufficiently changed that he remains as Kal's slave? Does he become Kal's lover? Does Kal take Brad to the gym to let him experience complete sluthood? I would love a chapter that includes Brad experiencing the joy of being a complete muscle slut. Definitely more material if you have any creative urges left for this series.
4/16/24, 7:22 PM
Amazing i loved it very much
4/16/24, 6:29 PM
As I have always wanted to be in a throuple relationship, but took too long to know who I was and since magic isn’t real, I can’t go back. Fantastic ending to what is now my favorite story!
Ty Bond
4/16/24, 4:14 PM
I read this while in a chastity cage I actually leaked in it just reading your story, I wish there was a ratting above 5 stars. Thank you Master writer.
Anonymous
4/16/24, 11:28 AM
An excellent way to tie up the story! Very much enjoyed it and almost want to know whats happening with Kal now. Still, very much enjoyed this chapter!
R P
4/16/24, 10:41 AM
What a great series - definitely one of my new favourites!
John
4/16/24, 6:53 AM
Thank you so much for this ending
4/16/24, 3:41 AM
Awww. What a cute ending. I prefer this throuple ending. And even Kal gets a somewhat happy ending, thanks to Brad. I was just hoping the sex scene we got for this chapter is with Brads actual body and not just a magically transformed Kal. Its also interesting that Brad wished to be a versed-bottom, rather than just an actual verse. I guess that week long bottom experience stayed with him. Also, its interesting that both endings have Brad ended up being owned by someone. I guess thats what Brad needed, someone to own him. Enjoyed reading this series and hope to read more stories from you.
4/16/24, 2:43 AM
Great work on this whole story! I really love how, whichever way things go down, Brad and Kal both end up satisfied, if not exactly happy, with the outcome. Both endings feel equally true to the story as a whole, which is really impressive!
Sss
4/16/24, 12:55 AM
Definitely prefer this ending. I also love the aesthetic of the magic.