Recent Comments

11/30/25, 12:59 PM
Maximus makes my heart ache. Take psychological abuse and dial it up to 11.
11/30/25, 2:23 AM
I can't even begin to tell you how sorely missed you were on my front page, Soren. But this has been worth the wait! As always, your world brims with character and charm, from the bodypaint serving as a warning (or a temptation), to the frat warfare angle, to even the ghosts at the obstacle course always bring rich worldbuilding without being too much. Looking forward to fleshing out the Hunter/Caspian relationship, and of course, seeing what those naiads are up to... Outstanding work, dude! (Plus...ya' know...the _fingers in the mouth_ thing is my shit.)

11/30/25, 5:11 AM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) I love fingers in the mouth, I don't know why! It's too good. I'm glad you enjoyed the vibes, I had a lot of fun with the world in this story--and the relationships. Hopefully it'll be fun to see how they unfold. The naiads will surface very soon...
11/30/25, 4:41 AM
Fucking amazingly hot story. Kept me boned and leaking and now I’m horny as fuck. Keep writing dude and I’ll read everything you put out. Thanks
11/28/25, 10:37 AM
Oh, sure! Just what I wanted to wake up to; the gut-punch chapter! XD Yes, yes, I know things are darkest before the dawn and all that,... Still adore this story and the characters! Glad to see this chapter up :3 Thank you!

11/28/25, 7:05 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Haha the real Gut punch hadnt even happened yet.

11/29/25, 8:01 PM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) You make things WORSE? damn.
11/28/25, 2:44 PM
It's good to see a character that is not a plain psychopath. He has wants and needs. He is having fun but he is not being cruel. Thanks for writing!

11/29/25, 2:26 AM
@[BrGuy](/user/show/10033894) My pleasure, and thanks for reading!
11/28/25, 9:31 AM
I rarely comment, but your story is just awesome. The idea of the brainwashing already happened is absolutely genius and now that battle that takes place between each side fighting for Max, is just chefs kiss. As reader of this less sexual but way more erotic story, I'm asking about the background of Thomas and Colby. For now the characters seem a little underdeveloped and all is focusing on Max, at least they dont get the same attention as Max. For Colby and Max' teammates, that might be okay, as they're side characters, but it would be interesting to read more about their background too. Overall this story is chef's kiss and I am really looking forward to see how you have planned to end it. At this point, I have great sympathy for Max and Colby's plan. Good work! Thanks for sharing it

11/28/25, 7:18 PM
@[JasonB2](/user/show/10042798) Mostly because at one point I’d planned on a second book where Maximus goes with colby to the ranch and we learn more there. But I never did it. I got discouraged at how poorly this did and kinda let it sit for quite a few months. It’s been done since June. Just. Kinda gave up. But I decided to let people see it.

11/29/25, 1:23 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) "But I decided to let people see it." GOOD! Because it is a great story! -_-
11/28/25, 10:29 PM
Nice blend of romance and bdsm elements. Where can I get one of those watches?
11/28/25, 2:28 PM
Can't wait for more

11/28/25, 7:34 PM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) I’ll put the next part up in a few days or so.
Bik
11/28/25, 2:56 PM
It's a small thing but I'm living for the increasingly ridiculous ways to write Mom out of the story! It's so funny

11/28/25, 5:06 PM
@Bik I wanted to write that she was trapped on a roller coaster in one chapter but I couldn’t figure out a way to write it in!
11/27/25, 6:32 PM
Incredible story.

11/28/25, 2:56 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks again!