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12/1/25, 3:39 PM
Great chapter
12/1/25, 7:32 AM
This all started with a Garth Brooks song, which is the literal last thing I ever expected to see referenced in a story on this site, then it shifted into Seven of Nine territory and now its making me care about these boys as more than just faceless erotica characters, and I'm not sure what to do about any of this except be delighted and hope we're not headed for an Iron Giant ending. I'm conflicted, because I'm enjoying the hell out of this, but after this section, it feels like this couldn't possibly end in the way most stories around here do, unless you were looking to pivot real dark in the end. It's starting to feel more like a romance novel now, which is definitely not what I signed up for when I started, but I'm more than OK with now that we're here. Can't wait to see how it ends.

12/1/25, 1:13 PM
@[bak2jak](/user/show/141970) It does not go dark. But it doesn’t end the way you might think.
12/1/25, 3:10 AM
Sorry I disappeared. I've actually been working on a novel for about ten months and it is getting published! but it is just in the line edit process...so...its like seven months away...and is not mind control...but it does have a werewolf! I will finish this over the next couple weeks for everyone that liked it.
Anonymous
11/30/25, 9:36 PM
Can't wait for more!
11/30/25, 12:59 PM
Maximus makes my heart ache. Take psychological abuse and dial it up to 11.
11/30/25, 2:23 AM
I can't even begin to tell you how sorely missed you were on my front page, Soren. But this has been worth the wait! As always, your world brims with character and charm, from the bodypaint serving as a warning (or a temptation), to the frat warfare angle, to even the ghosts at the obstacle course always bring rich worldbuilding without being too much. Looking forward to fleshing out the Hunter/Caspian relationship, and of course, seeing what those naiads are up to... Outstanding work, dude! (Plus...ya' know...the _fingers in the mouth_ thing is my shit.)

11/30/25, 5:11 AM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) I love fingers in the mouth, I don't know why! It's too good. I'm glad you enjoyed the vibes, I had a lot of fun with the world in this story--and the relationships. Hopefully it'll be fun to see how they unfold. The naiads will surface very soon...
11/30/25, 4:41 AM
Fucking amazingly hot story. Kept me boned and leaking and now I’m horny as fuck. Keep writing dude and I’ll read everything you put out. Thanks
11/28/25, 10:37 AM
Oh, sure! Just what I wanted to wake up to; the gut-punch chapter! XD Yes, yes, I know things are darkest before the dawn and all that,... Still adore this story and the characters! Glad to see this chapter up :3 Thank you!

11/28/25, 7:05 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Haha the real Gut punch hadnt even happened yet.

11/29/25, 8:01 PM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) You make things WORSE? damn.
11/28/25, 2:44 PM
It's good to see a character that is not a plain psychopath. He has wants and needs. He is having fun but he is not being cruel. Thanks for writing!

11/29/25, 2:26 AM
@[BrGuy](/user/show/10033894) My pleasure, and thanks for reading!
11/28/25, 9:31 AM
I rarely comment, but your story is just awesome. The idea of the brainwashing already happened is absolutely genius and now that battle that takes place between each side fighting for Max, is just chefs kiss. As reader of this less sexual but way more erotic story, I'm asking about the background of Thomas and Colby. For now the characters seem a little underdeveloped and all is focusing on Max, at least they dont get the same attention as Max. For Colby and Max' teammates, that might be okay, as they're side characters, but it would be interesting to read more about their background too. Overall this story is chef's kiss and I am really looking forward to see how you have planned to end it. At this point, I have great sympathy for Max and Colby's plan. Good work! Thanks for sharing it

11/28/25, 7:18 PM
@[JasonB2](/user/show/10042798) Mostly because at one point I’d planned on a second book where Maximus goes with colby to the ranch and we learn more there. But I never did it. I got discouraged at how poorly this did and kinda let it sit for quite a few months. It’s been done since June. Just. Kinda gave up. But I decided to let people see it.

11/29/25, 1:23 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) "But I decided to let people see it." GOOD! Because it is a great story! -_-