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Grieyson
7/4/25, 6:21 AM
I, too, hope we get a new chapter soon. Father/son corruption is 🔥
7/1/25, 3:42 AM
I stumbled across this tonight and as some of the other commenters have mentioned, I wanted to sing the praises of this story. It was raw, it was magical, it was full of fear, and trying and hoping that you'd find your place. This story is magnificent and it left an impact

7/4/25, 12:00 AM
@[Knighte](/user/show/10018571) Thanks for the kind words!
7/3/25, 7:10 PM
Maximus's Father is human garbage. A very real-life example (clearly exaggerated) of how many people are treated when they are different. I understand what you're trying to do here.

7/3/25, 7:40 PM
@[hypnopaladin](/user/show/10058683) After seeing your comment last chapter, I _was_ wondering how you might feel once we actually met him. Certainly no contender for father of the year!

7/3/25, 11:03 PM
@[hypnopaladin](/user/show/10058683) Yes, I am going for something akin to how kids were and still are treated by parents when they might not exactly follow the exact ideals they do. I've sadly seen it more than once. Thankfully, this is exaggerated, but still something like this used to occur...
7/3/25, 7:47 PM
More little glimpses of Maximus breaking through! Colby is medicine for the soul :3 Good work!

7/3/25, 11:02 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) The best part of wakin' up might be a little Colby in your cup!
7/3/25, 10:32 PM
Very immersive and intriguing story so far. Reads well. Dialogue and inner thoughts line up with the thinking patterns of a late teens male. I'm curious how the three friends got changed before the story begins. Definitely wanting to learn more in future chapters.
7/2/25, 11:39 AM
I absolutely loved the story and wished I had been one of the Hardy men. I could not put it down.

7/3/25, 3:09 PM
@[anon-868](/user/show/10012980) I’m glad to hear. Thank you!
BW4
7/1/25, 1:30 PM
That was a really hot story

7/3/25, 3:08 PM
@[BW4](/user/show/10016706) Thank you!
Anonymous
7/3/25, 6:05 AM
Yay! I LOVE these two! ❤️❤️❤️ Now to break the news to the kids...
7/3/25, 1:29 AM
As ever, Aard outdoes everybody else and shows why he's the master of the craft. Dean is one of my favorite creations of his. Roll on the next chapter!