Recent Comments

5/20/24, 6:57 AM
Finally, someone touched the moral implications of mind control, and you did it in such a classy, fantastic way! This was not only really well-written but the entire premise shows there was thought put into it beyond mere revenge, while ending it in a wholesome way that does not sound unrealistic. Amazing job, simply fantastic!
Willie Cici
5/20/24, 2:21 AM
I loved this story. I read it twice just in case I missed anything. The comments above are all on point. Keep writing! You have a knack.
Anonymous
5/16/24, 10:49 AM
I implore you, you genius writer, please don't stop writing this absolute masterpiece.:pray:

5/20/24, 12:44 AM
@Anonymous Hey, thanks for this - made my night! Just submitted Part Two, so it should be up in the next day or so. Hope ya enjoy!
5/19/24, 2:01 PM
absolutely BEAUTIFUL

5/19/24, 8:24 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
5/19/24, 1:59 PM
I can’t believe I missed this when it came out! The descriptions of the dicks, the cum inflation, the sleazy hypersexual atmosphere… loved it.
5/19/24, 1:11 PM
WOW! This is REALLY GOOD READING! I am IN!
5/19/24, 12:51 PM
That was a pleasure to read. You are a great writer!
Anonym
5/18/24, 5:32 PM
OH THAT'S SUCH A GOOD STORY!! Love how you've written it, love that Blake has a conscience and I love that they get a happy ending. Amazing story. I will definetly be re-reading that one in the future.

5/19/24, 12:13 PM
@[Anonym](/user/show/1317836) Thank you! To be honest, I’m not sure he actually did develop a conscience - he didn’t actually let them go, after all. I suspect it’s more likely he was just scared about the depth of his feelings for Trent and the fact that he didn’t think they would be returned, and so pushed him away and then rationalised his behaviour by saying that it was him trying to do “the right thing”. If you’d prefer to think he has a conscience you can - once it’s published, it’s out for all to interpret.
5/19/24, 10:23 AM
You are one of the best new writers on the site.:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: This was super-well written and super-sexy. I was worried about the romance aspect when the guy started as an hypnotized slave, but you really managed to make it work and belivable those two fell in love. :green_heart:

5/19/24, 12:08 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thank you! To be honest, I didn’t approach it thinking that it would be romantic - right up until the third scene I honestly thought it was going somewhere totally different, but the characters disagreed, I guess 😂