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5/24/24, 10:35 PM
alternate continuations are all the rage these days. Could do one path where the monster gets what he wants and another where he doesn't.

5/25/24, 7:55 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) I support this idea :)

5/25/24, 12:50 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Yeah, maybe we could have a split ending. One getting their wish undone or have the evil route and let the "villain" gets his way
5/24/24, 6:42 PM
1. I'm kinda confused at Tyler's insistence that Brian reverse his Riley wish tomorrow. Why didn't he insist on doing it right then when he told Brian not to wish them be straight? 2. "before turning back to my fucking friends." This line cracks me up lmao I love a good pun 3. My god seduction scenes are always hotter than straight up sex and this one did not disappoint. Love this!

5/24/24, 7:18 PM
@[Zi19](/user/show/922060) 1. Brian’s *stated* reason for the obedience wish is to force Riley to undo the gay wish. So delaying undoing the gay wish implies delaying reversal of the obedience wish. Tyler doesn’t realize yet that Brian is lying. 2. Thank you. I try to add some subtle humor and it feels great that people pick up on it. House/Javi is fun for me to write for this reason. 3. Agreed. And now everyone can seduce all the time! Next chapter, we get to see how Brian uses this power, as a contrast to Tyler.

5/25/24, 12:48 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Oh fuck, its Brians turn to seduce? Im hating his character more and more. But i guess we have to "endure" his cockiness for awhile.
5/24/24, 6:32 PM
Another great addition to an amazing story. Can’t wait to see where this goes next
5/24/24, 5:15 PM
😈😈😈 And that was a GREAT save with that wish! I hope they're able to save their friend who seems so lost now...
5/24/24, 3:23 PM
Tyler is AWESOME! What a great chapter post Brian.
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5/24/24, 7:22 AM
Thanks for the second chapter. Surprisingly, imagining an ugly boy with massive pecs is far more of a turn-on than just a perfect guy. Keep going. I hope you get all the encouragement you need.
5/23/24, 3:48 AM
That was great. Well written. I do hope he gave him a litter :smirk:
5/17/24, 5:04 AM
I really liked it. Good Job!

5/22/24, 2:09 PM
@[Rainbow's Dreamer](/user/show/1224976) Thank you!
5/22/24, 6:38 AM
Great start with so much potential for a hot power exchange! Looking forward to more, please!