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5/26/24, 3:56 AM
I really hope this story has a happy ending. I love it so far, but it's going to be really hard if Brian wins, when all the other characters seem so sweet
Island Jock
5/24/24, 5:51 PM
time for Tyler to seduce his friends into submission!

5/26/24, 12:59 AM
@[Island Jock](/user/show/925246) Tyler is amazing! Love his antics and his 'gay fairy daddy' behavior. He is such a good guy and will be a greater leader for his friends!
5/25/24, 12:56 PM
Im emjoying Joe and Noahs, they are just in their own fucking bubble. And my god, Brian is really insufferable. I know he is the antagonist of this story but he is getting on my nerve..im wishing more and more that there will be comeuppance to him at the end. And Tyler, he really is so charming. Love that he uses his "power" or wish to fix a friendship, and the sex being the bonus. I really enjoy and find the seduction the hottest part of this chapter. Not sure if im looking forward to the next chapter since its Brian's pov. But oh well, cant complain, we need the story to move forward, even if it involved Brian.

5/25/24, 9:36 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) I completely agree!

5/26/24, 12:58 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) With you on this. On both parts. The dislike of Brian and his stuff and the wish he gets his comeuppance , and the love of Tyler and his stuff. Tyler is awesome. What a great gay fairy daddy! Also I'm with you on the next chapter. Though I know where I stand, and its not really looking forward to next chapter/brian pov stuff at all.
5/25/24, 8:56 PM
Fuck this was hot!
John
5/24/24, 4:11 PM
Christ the sissy teasing in this chapter :smiling_face_with_tear: Just kidding I loved it. I love it when you write sissification stuff Also I kinda wish Brian wins I can't lie

5/25/24, 5:09 PM
@John Me too! I love to watch good guys like this taken down by their jerk friend haha
5/25/24, 3:03 PM
Gotta say, I know it's awful, but I can't wait to see what Brian has Riley wish for next. I'm assuming/hoping it'll be something to affect his friends to get around the fact that he can't wish against them directly.
5/24/24, 10:35 PM
alternate continuations are all the rage these days. Could do one path where the monster gets what he wants and another where he doesn't.

5/25/24, 7:55 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) I support this idea :)

5/25/24, 12:50 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Yeah, maybe we could have a split ending. One getting their wish undone or have the evil route and let the "villain" gets his way
5/24/24, 6:42 PM
1. I'm kinda confused at Tyler's insistence that Brian reverse his Riley wish tomorrow. Why didn't he insist on doing it right then when he told Brian not to wish them be straight? 2. "before turning back to my fucking friends." This line cracks me up lmao I love a good pun 3. My god seduction scenes are always hotter than straight up sex and this one did not disappoint. Love this!

5/24/24, 7:18 PM
@[Zi19](/user/show/922060) 1. Brian’s *stated* reason for the obedience wish is to force Riley to undo the gay wish. So delaying undoing the gay wish implies delaying reversal of the obedience wish. Tyler doesn’t realize yet that Brian is lying. 2. Thank you. I try to add some subtle humor and it feels great that people pick up on it. House/Javi is fun for me to write for this reason. 3. Agreed. And now everyone can seduce all the time! Next chapter, we get to see how Brian uses this power, as a contrast to Tyler.

5/25/24, 12:48 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Oh fuck, its Brians turn to seduce? Im hating his character more and more. But i guess we have to "endure" his cockiness for awhile.
5/24/24, 6:32 PM
Another great addition to an amazing story. Can’t wait to see where this goes next