It’s taken me a while to get my thoughts together, but the next chapter comes out tomorrow so I’d better get this in now. Forgive me if I ramble! @Naedre It’s a testament to your skill as a writer that this story has kept me waiting even though, in a weird way, I hate reading it, because Brian is so utterly horrible. I find that I can’t enjoy any of the rest of it (all well-written and fun!) because I’m constantly thinking about how cruel he is and what he might do to Riley and the others, to the point where the rest of the plot feels like a distraction. I’m terrified of the next chapter for that reason, if I’m honest. All that got me thinking about WHY I hate Brian so much. Plenty of the stories on this site have villains/antagonists, but Brian is bringing up a particularly strong response (and not just for me, judging by the comments). And I know why now. Some villains, like Todd from dear @Swizzington “Slave Academy,” at least have the excuse of being bullied or wanting revenge. But Brian? Brian is just a smug, entitled jerk who genuinely thinks he’s better than other people (look at how he says that his friends will be servants). And that entitlement is so great that he has to destroy the happiness of other people just to keep his own ego afloat (deliberately making Riley hate Tyler is the prime example). There’s no “Freudian Excuse” (a TVTrope) here. He’s just an entitled, smug prick with no redeeming qualities. And that’s so hard to read. I’ve hated that character type for so long (@Swizzington presents one in “Master of the House,” and @Edlam has the bully in “Re-Educator”—one of the few stories on here that genuinely disgusted me because of him). You’re in the pantheon now! :p Who knows what tomorrow will bring? I don’t want to read the chapter because I don’t want to see more entitlement and cruelty for cruelty’s sake (which, in reflecting, hurts because we see that in real life so often). But I’m also eager to read just so I can know what happens and if I can stop worrying about the other characters. That’s the mark of a truly great story. Those are my thoughts, such as they are. Well done…

The restlessness in my pants suggests that there is a lot of potential in this story. Can hardly wait for the next instalment !!

Great to have this back. Excited to see where you take it.

Love the story and I hope you one day revisit it.

Loved it, hopefully he gets to top again

I love it! I'm glad you wrote again. I love to see him at school with his new powers. All the jocks he could have sex with. I hope he can top.

I thought this was a bittersweet story. I feel for Mike and Ari. I enjoyed how you gave us a glimpse of their shared love and how they dealt with issues between them. It rare to experience that in the real world. Its great to see you try to bring those thoughts to your readers.

Fuck, what’s happening to Riley is literally my greatest fantasy

Oooh shiit. Two tempterd together. Damn. Cant wait for the next chapter. The two guards are loose ends though. A tempter should touch them just incase. It could be Matt or the locked tempter. Just to be safe.

I LOVE this new chapter and continuation of this great story. Please keep it coming. Can’t wait to see what happens next.