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Sss
6/1/24, 2:35 AM
I hate Brian so much. He literally makes me want to puke. I can feel the sensation in my throat.
Sss
6/1/24, 2:25 AM
I hope Brian gets absolutely destroyed and alk of his wishes and changes get reversed.
John
5/31/24, 9:13 PM
You are at your best when you write cruel, undeserving changes. Hottest thing you've ever written and I have been a fan since waaaaaay back with the original Asmodeus story beginning
5/31/24, 8:38 PM
I loved _what_ Brian did to these guys, but not _why_ he did it. He's detestable -- actually a turnoff for me, and I wish I hadn't seen into his head. But your writing, as always, is fantastic. Your erotic parts of your stories are so good, and so inventive, it dampens my disgust of Brian a little bit. Still, I honestly wish he weren't part of this story. One of the things I love about wish fulfillment stories in this niche genre is dealing with the consequences of poorly thought out wishes, and so far, the consequences just haven't been that dire. People are getting what they want, even in contradictory ways. Really looking forward to the continuation of this story!

5/31/24, 8:45 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Great response! (You said what I was trying to say much more succinctly). :p I think I would enjoy the story if Brian was not a part of it. But it’s a sign of how good Naedre is that we’re all talking about it!

5/31/24, 8:46 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) This sums up my view pretty well. So I wanted to second it.
5/31/24, 7:25 PM
Absolutely great seeing Brian go full villain! Can't wait to see if his plans for the other guys succeed! I'm hoping he at the least comes out of this with Tyler under his thumb even if Riley manages to get free and the other guys avoid trouble. Love to watch a bad boy win against a goody twoshoes.
5/31/24, 4:26 PM
Damn, you have to hope that the House doesn't twist that last wish. "My master" is open ended, and "protected from" are ripe for abuse by a genie (even if the house doesn't generally seem to work like that).
5/31/24, 4:16 PM
This is an incredible work, scorching hot, great characterization. Keep it up!!
5/31/24, 3:33 PM
If Brian does lose (in at least one ending, if there's an alternate path too) it should be by having his self-delusions collapse leaving him a bawling mess where he's no longer able to hide from his deeper feelings, with his paper-thin superficial alpha nature stripped away. I'm not sure if it was your intention to make him more of a monster with the "I'll never be vulnerable" stuff but instead of making me hate him more it made me basically want the house to be his genie-therapist ;)
5/31/24, 11:08 AM
I'm calling it now, this gotta be Matt's dad!