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Anonymous
6/2/24, 1:05 PM
Can Goku have a turn? Having JPS.
6/2/24, 7:43 AM
I must be one of the few that's rooting for Brian. Yes - he's awful but at the same time, the control and power he's wielding is really hot! One question though @Naedre: you seem to have it in for Brits. Bad experience?

6/2/24, 8:21 AM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Hah, I have nothing but love for Brits in general. British tourists in Spain? The setting is inspired by a real town I visited pre-COVID (and pre-Brexit.) I do have a vivid memory of a bunch of drunk British girls trying to start a fight with me and my gay friends because the late-night food place we all ended up at ran out of fries/“chips.”

6/2/24, 8:49 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Ugh, that sucks. I live in Essex so I can definitely empathise with the situation you ended up in!
6/2/24, 8:09 AM
If Brian wins in the end we riot :rofl: You've crafted a wonderful villain, he's just a bad person, seemingly utterly beyond redemption. Pride comes before the fall methinks. Delighted to hear there are more chapter coming. And as an approver i get to read them just that little bit earlier!
mllmllmll
6/2/24, 6:24 AM
genuinely fucking incredible. Immaculate, from grammar down to the plot itself. I have never felt the urge to comment until now. Looking forward to savoring the rest!
6/2/24, 6:07 AM
I mean, I detest Brian same as everyone else; but I love your writing. Thus, with 6 more chapters to go I say bring on the corruption and ramp up the perversion. Also I would love to see the chapters get posted quicker then since you are almost done writing it and I am super excited in multiple ways to read more and more of your incredible writing. 😉
Pax
6/1/24, 10:39 PM
I definitely see a wish cascade coming. Brian will make some kind of wish that Riley will automatically say yes to like ordered, that wish will then cause Riley to make a wish that will affect Brian because Brian didn't think to protect himself from Riley.
6/1/24, 9:06 PM
I look forward to coming for more and this didn’t disappoint. Liked the insight into this character. I’m not sure who I’m rooting for. All kinds of love for this. Keep it up