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6/3/24, 5:44 PM
I liked when he told him he loved him. 🥹
Anonymous
6/3/24, 3:05 AM
extremely promising setup, can't wait for more!!
6/2/24, 3:05 PM
Ok, I write this knowing it has already been completed so this is just hypothetical speculation…. RILEY IS IRREVERSIBLE SCREWED and no one can do anything about it except him. He, as the others, can opt out of Brian’s wishes, so even IF Brian were to wish him free Riley could, and probably would, opt out of the effects of the wish thus making him Brian’s slave. I’m just thinking out loud. I too want Brian to lose, very badly, in the end….but it will be interesting to see what ultimately happens to Riley regardless
John
6/2/24, 2:36 PM
I hope that Brian gets taken down. I really enjoy this story, except him. I want to see Riley rescued and Brian ruined.
Anonymous
6/2/24, 1:05 PM
Can Goku have a turn? Having JPS.
6/2/24, 7:43 AM
I must be one of the few that's rooting for Brian. Yes - he's awful but at the same time, the control and power he's wielding is really hot! One question though @Naedre: you seem to have it in for Brits. Bad experience?

6/2/24, 8:21 AM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Hah, I have nothing but love for Brits in general. British tourists in Spain? The setting is inspired by a real town I visited pre-COVID (and pre-Brexit.) I do have a vivid memory of a bunch of drunk British girls trying to start a fight with me and my gay friends because the late-night food place we all ended up at ran out of fries/“chips.”

6/2/24, 8:49 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Ugh, that sucks. I live in Essex so I can definitely empathise with the situation you ended up in!
6/2/24, 8:09 AM
If Brian wins in the end we riot :rofl: You've crafted a wonderful villain, he's just a bad person, seemingly utterly beyond redemption. Pride comes before the fall methinks. Delighted to hear there are more chapter coming. And as an approver i get to read them just that little bit earlier!
mllmllmll
6/2/24, 6:24 AM
genuinely fucking incredible. Immaculate, from grammar down to the plot itself. I have never felt the urge to comment until now. Looking forward to savoring the rest!
6/2/24, 6:07 AM
I mean, I detest Brian same as everyone else; but I love your writing. Thus, with 6 more chapters to go I say bring on the corruption and ramp up the perversion. Also I would love to see the chapters get posted quicker then since you are almost done writing it and I am super excited in multiple ways to read more and more of your incredible writing. 😉