I knew that Tyler would figure things out about Brian’s scheme right away. But now why am I worried that Brian and/or Riley can now seduce Javi to turn him against the other three? I really _(really)_ don’t want Brian to win. Great stuff so far. I can’t wait for the next part.

I'm so glad I stuck around--thank you for your kindness in messaging me, @Naedre! This chapter is INCREDIBLE (and a lot of that has to do with the fact that Brian doesn't appear much, ha ha). Seeing Tyler, Noah, and Joe use their brains to outwit Brian is especially great given that he spent the whole last chapter bragging about how "superior" he is to them. Plus it's interesting to see characters thinking things through carefully in these stories; many of the tales on here have characters inadvertently falling into magical/hypnotic traps, and having Tyler immediately piece together what happened to Riley and how Brian was trying to use him as bait made me cheer. And you've done a fantastic job adding new dimensions to the heroic trio: Tyler's desire to protect others and his insecurities at being alone, Noah's hidden knowledge base (and social justice side!) and desire for love, and Joe's himbo nature belying a strong moral compass and acceptance of sexual liberation (he's a proud slut and encourages others to be the same!). The scene where he saves the kind woman from Warren (and she, in turn, proves completely accepting of homosexuality) is fantastic, and you do a great job at contrasting the transformative sex between Brian and the groom party (which was all for Brian's pleasure and didn't acknowledge their humanity) and Joe's time with Warren (when he fairly warns the other man about what will happen and is careful to consider how he is feeling). It's also great to see Javi actively assisting Tyler via loopholes--exact words are one of my favorite tropes, and seeing a genie use them for *good* as opposed to evil is a refreshing twist. It will be interesting to see what happens with his new human form--and Noah's contract; somehow I doubt that Brian will like being outvoted, and the democratic process might not work when magic is involved (especially since, as we saw, he could force Tyler to vote with him by threatening Riley). I'm genuinely excited to see what happens next! :D Thank you for the fantastic story!

Congratulations on another reworked chapter. The bath scene has been one of my favourite moments with the dynamic between Rhys and Jasper. There's a chance it introduces suspicion from Rhys about Jasper's quick acceptance of petness and Rhys also learns of the layers of his pet. I enjoyed his fantasies about the two of them domming other Coins. The tenderness mixed in with the eroticism is really wonderful. It feels like something you both do very well.

I honestly like multiple endings, part of me wants to see Brian lose, but the sub in me wants to see him win. Course I'm not the author and trust you got everything planned out and it'll be hot 🔥

If I were Tyler, I would fuck Noah/Joe to make them an exact copy of Riley with sub-making cum and send him as a Trojan horse to Brian

I absolutely love this story. I can’t wait for it to continue. I find myself checking just to see if a new chapter is posted

I really really want to see a sissified Ramon!

This was really great! Soooo good! Such a fantastic chapter! Loved all the parts but especially the Warren stuff. But also Javi. Oh and also the Tyler stuff. Soo good!

I suppose they could wish for Riley to say a wish that would do something to Brian? Maybe give him a moral compass?

Brilliant work!