Maybe I missed it, but I don’t think Tyler ever told Joe and Noah that Ryley’s cum is addicted. They only have a majority vote by one, so my prediction is Joe or Noah will accidentally make the error or becoming Ryley’s cum addict and tip the scale in Brian’s favour. I’m thinking this because Noah said Joe was addicted to his cock, which might be foreshadowing. I’m guessing Joe will become addicted to Ryley’s cock and Brian will use and abuse that which will break Noah’s spirit (or worse). But I’m also not worried about Javi’s physical body being an issue. The wording of the wish was that Javi COULD (not must) create a human body for himself, therefore implying Javi could uncreate it at a moments notice. With the omnipresent powers of knowing Brian’s scheme, Javi will know the moment something goes south and can just pop its body out of existence. All Tyler’s wish did was give Javi the ability to create a physical body for itself, not tie itself to a new physical body.

Oh my gosh!! 😍😍😍😍

Great chapter. It is nice to see the difference with someone "evil" and someone with conscience about seducing and body manipulation. Tyley and Joe asking for consent when they are changing someone. Brian really gets into my nerve. You, Naedre, written the perfecg villain to hate on. Im now worried with what Asisasion mentioned, with Riley trying to seduce either Noah or Joe. I really hope this two couple is smart to not to fall to Rileys seduction. And about this two, i enjoy reading how their relationship develops. Friends to Fuck Buddies and to hopefully Lovers. I now wonder how will Javi affect the story. I love the bond/relationship of Tyler and Javi before, but im not sure how it will be now that Javi have a human manifestation. But im still rooting for Tyler and Riley though. Also, Brian better have his comeuppance or i will riot. (Just Kidding, unless). I hope Riley's "master" wish wording comes in play for Brians downfall.

My god I wish I could live in this hot fucking world. Damn. All that cum cock and freedom. Heaven

I knew that Tyler would figure things out about Brian’s scheme right away. But now why am I worried that Brian and/or Riley can now seduce Javi to turn him against the other three? I really _(really)_ don’t want Brian to win. Great stuff so far. I can’t wait for the next part.

I'm so glad I stuck around--thank you for your kindness in messaging me, @Naedre! This chapter is INCREDIBLE (and a lot of that has to do with the fact that Brian doesn't appear much, ha ha). Seeing Tyler, Noah, and Joe use their brains to outwit Brian is especially great given that he spent the whole last chapter bragging about how "superior" he is to them. Plus it's interesting to see characters thinking things through carefully in these stories; many of the tales on here have characters inadvertently falling into magical/hypnotic traps, and having Tyler immediately piece together what happened to Riley and how Brian was trying to use him as bait made me cheer. And you've done a fantastic job adding new dimensions to the heroic trio: Tyler's desire to protect others and his insecurities at being alone, Noah's hidden knowledge base (and social justice side!) and desire for love, and Joe's himbo nature belying a strong moral compass and acceptance of sexual liberation (he's a proud slut and encourages others to be the same!). The scene where he saves the kind woman from Warren (and she, in turn, proves completely accepting of homosexuality) is fantastic, and you do a great job at contrasting the transformative sex between Brian and the groom party (which was all for Brian's pleasure and didn't acknowledge their humanity) and Joe's time with Warren (when he fairly warns the other man about what will happen and is careful to consider how he is feeling). It's also great to see Javi actively assisting Tyler via loopholes--exact words are one of my favorite tropes, and seeing a genie use them for *good* as opposed to evil is a refreshing twist. It will be interesting to see what happens with his new human form--and Noah's contract; somehow I doubt that Brian will like being outvoted, and the democratic process might not work when magic is involved (especially since, as we saw, he could force Tyler to vote with him by threatening Riley). I'm genuinely excited to see what happens next! :D Thank you for the fantastic story!

Congratulations on another reworked chapter. The bath scene has been one of my favourite moments with the dynamic between Rhys and Jasper. There's a chance it introduces suspicion from Rhys about Jasper's quick acceptance of petness and Rhys also learns of the layers of his pet. I enjoyed his fantasies about the two of them domming other Coins. The tenderness mixed in with the eroticism is really wonderful. It feels like something you both do very well.

I honestly like multiple endings, part of me wants to see Brian lose, but the sub in me wants to see him win. Course I'm not the author and trust you got everything planned out and it'll be hot 🔥

If I were Tyler, I would fuck Noah/Joe to make them an exact copy of Riley with sub-making cum and send him as a Trojan horse to Brian

I absolutely love this story. I can’t wait for it to continue. I find myself checking just to see if a new chapter is posted