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6/11/24, 5:14 AM
Thanks man! It's great to have you back. Please, continue. You're a great writer and I really enjoy it.
6/11/24, 4:47 AM
This is awesome.
6/11/24, 4:43 AM
Welcome back! (I guess, since this is my first time reading your story. Just new reader here) Anyway, love the story concept and it is very hot. Hope you continue updating it. Maybe you could add Chris and Will to the mix.
6/11/24, 4:35 AM
What a treat! Surprised that I hadn't seen any of your previous chapters before today.. my good fortune to read them all in one sitting! This is brilliant, I'm hooked. Thank you!
thesaxcat
6/11/24, 1:58 AM
please, please PLEASE keep going!
Jun 17, 2023
3/5/24, 6:58 PM
Love this story! It got me in all the feels! Can't wait to read more!

6/10/24, 2:48 PM
@[Tommy B](/user/show/10022728) I'm glad you liked it!
6/8/24, 1:52 AM
Maybe I missed it, but I don’t think Tyler ever told Joe and Noah that Ryley’s cum is addicted. They only have a majority vote by one, so my prediction is Joe or Noah will accidentally make the error or becoming Ryley’s cum addict and tip the scale in Brian’s favour. I’m thinking this because Noah said Joe was addicted to his cock, which might be foreshadowing. I’m guessing Joe will become addicted to Ryley’s cock and Brian will use and abuse that which will break Noah’s spirit (or worse). But I’m also not worried about Javi’s physical body being an issue. The wording of the wish was that Javi COULD (not must) create a human body for himself, therefore implying Javi could uncreate it at a moments notice. With the omnipresent powers of knowing Brian’s scheme, Javi will know the moment something goes south and can just pop its body out of existence. All Tyler’s wish did was give Javi the ability to create a physical body for itself, not tie itself to a new physical body.

Pax
6/8/24, 4:45 AM
@[Asisasio](/user/show/128107) Noah could just remove the physiological effects of any addiction though with his ability to shape Joe during sex.

6/8/24, 4:11 PM
@[Pax](/user/show/10006579) Not if Brian has the majority votes cast against them before that can happen

6/9/24, 6:17 PM
@[Asisasio](/user/show/128107) Why did you have to put this idea in me? Now im worried. I dont want Brian, who is the antagonist, to win or at least have the power during the climax of the story. Gonna stress now with this idea. Noooo.

6/10/24, 1:27 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) I think that's what @Naedre is building up to. Otherwise he wouldn't have left this loophole. I mean, I don't understand why they would even let Brian in after everything he has done and when he specifically decided not to share his wealth wish with them.
6/10/24, 3:41 AM
Oh my gosh!! 😍😍😍😍
6/9/24, 9:19 PM
Great chapter. It is nice to see the difference with someone "evil" and someone with conscience about seducing and body manipulation. Tyley and Joe asking for consent when they are changing someone. Brian really gets into my nerve. You, Naedre, written the perfecg villain to hate on. Im now worried with what Asisasion mentioned, with Riley trying to seduce either Noah or Joe. I really hope this two couple is smart to not to fall to Rileys seduction. And about this two, i enjoy reading how their relationship develops. Friends to Fuck Buddies and to hopefully Lovers. I now wonder how will Javi affect the story. I love the bond/relationship of Tyler and Javi before, but im not sure how it will be now that Javi have a human manifestation. But im still rooting for Tyler and Riley though. Also, Brian better have his comeuppance or i will riot. (Just Kidding, unless). I hope Riley's "master" wish wording comes in play for Brians downfall.
2/11/24, 3:27 AM
My god I wish I could live in this hot fucking world. Damn. All that cum cock and freedom. Heaven

6/9/24, 4:22 AM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Hey, never did respond to this comment! Yeah, I admit, as someone who writes in Consummation, I frequently wish I could be in it. No inhibitions, all the sex you want whenever you want it, freedom indeed. But I'm glad this world is still fun to escape to, even if it's only in our heads.