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6/17/24, 4:55 PM
I miss this story so much. Hoping the author can return to it someday. We'll be here waiting!
6/17/24, 1:50 PM
Looking at the tags, I have strong suspicions about who the writer is. Unless it's a first-time entry. We get a few of those every contest. Very hot and fun to read, in any case.💚 Would love a follow-up some day.
6/17/24, 7:19 AM
I love the slow seductive power shift. Once Alex started developing a crush on David, became obligated to David for his tutoring, and then humiliated by being caught wearing David's preppy clothes, his fate was pretty much sealed. Still i need to experience the complete power shift and David's total control, so please keep up with this story! If it pleases you, I'll even wear preppy clothes to be able to read more!
6/17/24, 4:47 AM
This was friggin outstanding.
Xackery
6/13/24, 11:03 PM
Why am I crying. What the fuck. This is beautiful.

6/17/24, 12:27 AM
@Xackery I'm glad this piece moved so many people. :heart:
thesaxcat
6/16/24, 10:41 PM
Well. That was amazing. Perhaps we get a second chapter after the challenge?
6/16/24, 5:38 PM
My hunch on where the story was going was definitely wrong. Blurry memory, missing pants, "Kingsley held the only key". In an alternate reality continuation, Joseph would pull out Kingsley's pants, with the key, "surprise!" and he'd get another shot at usurpation. Although I guess in that alternate reality he'd want another shot, rather than being glad to have lost.

6/16/24, 8:59 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Well, I'm always glad to subvert reader's expectations, haha! > Although I guess in that alternate reality he’d want another shot, rather than being glad to have lost. We shall see. We have a lot of stories to tell and more characters to get to. I think Joseph is very bullheaded, and it may take a few more knocks for him to realize his place...
6/16/24, 7:55 PM
Awesome story, got me going in an instant! Great early entrant in the story challenge!
6/16/24, 7:14 PM
The next morning: *communications link established*
*Unit 10,423 reporting to prime*
*Unit 10,423 now serving as initial mesh node for full collective communication*
6/15/24, 8:54 PM
Such a great series. My only question is does Noah’s “Lamphouse LLC” wish make them permanent residents of the house?

6/15/24, 9:00 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I would guess they would have to buy the house outright. If I remember correctly, the wish specified them as staying in the house just as a way to clarify who was included. But they have the money to but it, because whoever is renting it out now, either is allowing a reality altering house to be rented by whoever, or has no idea what it can do.