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Leathertref69
6/19/24, 1:37 PM
Cant wait for more chapters, please dont make us wait to long!

6/19/24, 3:58 PM
@[Leathertref69](/user/show/10050791) unfortunately because of dickheads that keep stealing my shit this and other stories will not be finished. thank you for understanding.
6/19/24, 8:56 AM
Oh, I was excited to leet the other three or four brothers, but we meet the sister instead? Nice! And Therma has quite the fun personality, and show a new, very creative use of the Pharaoh's powers! Wonderfully written and creative has always!!!!😀💚💚💚
6/17/24, 8:50 PM
Great! You *are* aware that multi-chapter stories are allowed in the contest, are you?

6/19/24, 12:07 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) I had not intended to write multiple chapters, but now I'm thinking I might. Considering each chapter exploring one of the multiple possible interpretations of the prompt 'the wrong roommate,' all tied into these drones and nanobots, of course.

6/19/24, 4:41 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Yay! Many hot hours ahead for us!
6/19/24, 4:36 AM
GH ID 1292865 Finally getting into the groove where resource income exceeds expenditures so events go a bit more smoothly. (Managed to totally complete the Smash Effect event and get both guys!)
6/18/24, 6:34 PM
So good to see you’re writing again. Can’t wait to see how this develops
6/18/24, 4:07 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, especially the cliffhanger “oh shit” moment at the end. I was engaged from the start and captivated by the end. I hope there is a follow up
6/18/24, 5:57 AM
I’m a sucker for a romantic power dynamic like this. I’d be an Alex any day of the week.
6/17/24, 10:44 PM
Damn that was hot. I can see some corruption in the future. Can the nanobots feel pleasure and want to take over Alex? Will Alex take a backseat to Prime and create his own army of over muscled sex slaves to dominate mankind?
6/17/24, 9:03 PM
An incredible story you've written, and what writing it is! I think this is top tier writing. No digression into fluff that doesn't add to the story. Everything flows well and keeps the reader engrossed. I want to read more from you. A big :thumbsup:

6/17/24, 9:34 PM
@[Grathocke](/user/show/10008532) Thank you so much, this is such a nice comment! I was really happy with this one so I'm so glad others like it too :heart:
thesaxcat
6/17/24, 8:34 PM
Keep it going!