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Anonymous
6/22/24, 10:25 AM
I am thinking that Brian’s obsession with bring down Tyler is going to be HIS undoing. He made a wish about the pheromones and made Riley wish about the hypnosis but did not exempt himself. He already has begun smelling Riley so it will be fun to see if anything comes of that
6/21/24, 9:04 PM
Wait! Tyler wished that he, Noah and Joe would be protected from any type of mind control and hypnosis counts as a type of mind control!! So basically, even if they copy Brain's wish, Riley's new hypnotic abilities are useless unless they want to be hypnotized! Genius! I can't wait to see how they use this to their advantage, and how it will turn the tide.

6/21/24, 10:28 PM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) I agree, i cant wait to see what will be Brian's reaction. He really gets to my nerve. He is a well written antagonist.

6/22/24, 9:19 AM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) Yeah but Brian's wish... if they accept having the pheremones bit then they consent to the hypnosis, and Tyler's wish has that 'with consent' addendum. So who knows how that's going to go.
Jun 21, 2024
6/22/24, 6:19 AM
Amazing thanks
6/22/24, 12:15 AM
I want more of Jun’s story!
Jun 21, 2024
6/21/24, 10:55 PM
Kyle, your updated story is **Great**. I think you would have won the competition with Ty, and avoided a month with a cage on without cumming! Unless that is your kink and you purposely lost! I think it is a kink for Ty and he would not be too unhappy to have lost the "cumpetition". Ty said that he does his best writing with a Cobra cage on, "absolutely, feeling the confines of the cage as it gets wet with cum leakage from visualizing the erotic scenes is a major inspiration and motivator" Hope it is for you too. I have read all of your stories posted here. Please write more. Thank you.
6/21/24, 10:36 PM
I just love that Riley's hate of Tyler makes him remember that Tyler is still a good person AND that Brian is not. Also love that Javi tricked Brian, and that he could just easily factory reset himself. I feel like theres also a loophole for Ty, Noah And Joe about Brian's wish. They already have mind control immunity plus they could still pick and choose Brian's wish. They could pick if they want to be affected by him and if they want the same powers that he had. They could just pick that they wont be affected, and not get the power. I really hope i got that right. Because it would be stressing me reading the chapters where Brian got the upperhand or if he somehow the control them. But i feel like, it would be connected to Riley to get Brian's comeuppance. Or i hope if gets one at the end. Cant wait for next chapter, which is next week.
Jun 21, 2024
6/21/24, 10:34 PM
How can i get me some Charlie smells. Thanks for the fun ride!
6/21/24, 9:44 PM
I won't say this story is the best part of my Friday, but I look forward to it every week and it has yet to disappoint. Keep up the great work!
Anon
6/21/24, 9:23 PM
Brian chapters are the hottets