I...holy SHIT. This was INCREDIBLE. How did you *think* of this? What an amazing chapter! I deliberately waited until I had time to read it carefully, and it was 100% worth the wait. I absolutely love Noah and Joe revealing their pasts--if there was ever an example of the perfect balance of "showing and telling," you found it in the brief but succinct story that Joe tells about his father. We don't need a single word more to learn what happened to his mother. And Joe showing that he was truly the bigger person by not seeking revenge, despite having all the magic in the world at his disposal...THAT'S how you write a balanced character. (Similarly, I love how all three men instantly reject Brian's "alpha pheromones" wish as stupid and self-indulgent--it again helps to show Brian as an aberration in the new and balanced world you're creating). You also do a brilliant job at depicting reality changes--everyone's memories, and the world's policies, sliding into place in the new "Nerd cock as needed for jocks" version of the universe. I especially love the new take on Cinderella with jocks and nerds seeking each other's "perfect fit" out through sex, and how nerd/jock hybrids get to feel both desires at once! And I love the idea of preventing sexual assaulters, too. If I have one complaint about this chapter, it's the form that prevention takes--the idea of bottoming and submission as a "punishment" raised my hackles slightly. But you do such an amazing job outlining the difference between submission and mutual pleasure, of what it means to bottom for joy while having an equal power balance versus being forced into it like Brian does, that it's understandable. And then, good LORD, the Void. A brief but brilliant recap of the Spanish Inquisition, false Christians converting and torturing innocents in the name of God, and the *perfect* symbol of the bastardization of Islamic history--a white Christian stealing something from Islamic culture, modifying it for evil purposes, and using it to literally enslave a descendant of that culture...I mean, in all seriousness, how do you DO that? In just one short section you've given Javi an entire backstory while never sacrificing plot, forward motion, or the other characterizations (Tyler's transformation of himself into the knight of Javi's dreams and sacred vow to save the day was the perfect fairy-tale ending). I say this with all the seriousness I can muster, Naedre: you are truly a gifted writer. You've done something incredible here, and we're all so lucky to get the chance to read your work. From the bottom of my heart...thank you. :)

Hey, just a heads up that I had to reorganize the series designations a little bit, since it was causing glitches on the backend to have numerous 'chapter ones' in a single series (aka, the Gay Fairy Tales series). I hope this is alright on your end. Please let me know if not!

I can't find the words... I enjoyed the wishes this chapter, the changes to the world, the unique justice... Then, the void... I have no words, but... Hauntingly beautiful, comes to mind... sad and heartbreaking, painful... that left me sobbing. Can't wait for more!

I don't get how you keep topping yourself like this. Must be a jock and a nerd ;) seriously though... I'm so impressed. And turned on. Congrats and thank you.

A basically perfect story haha. Super hot sex, characters that feel alive, fun mind control... hope there's a dozen more chapters waiting in the wings. I especially like that the drone kink isn't erasing personalities for more than a few seconds at a time. I love the nanobots mind control thing, but when people talk like robots in the middle of sex it kinda loses me. This is a really fun mix of vibes!

I doubt the plan works on the others. Hypnosis is mind control. So they still get a choice.

Intriguing setting and concept, I can tell that you've put a lot of thought into it so I'm looking forward to seeing you exploring it. Looks like there's going to be a lot of focus on the psychological aspects of the transformation, given you've got a cast of characters who don't feel like they have much going for them/don't feel they have much to look forward to I can see this getting pretty heavy. With the transformed objects seemingly reaching 'acceptance' hopefully things will end up more or less ok, but I suspect that it's a situation where things will get worse before they get better. Either way, I'm really curious to see what you have in store for this characters/how they'll develop going forward.

wow fives across the board this is excellent

A wonderful opening, i wonder what sort of object he would become? I'm thinking sundial but we'll see!

Oh my! This was awesome and amazing!