I like Nick. Ray is about to have an interesting semester. Glad to see this new story from you. I'm always in awe of your storytelling. What will they transform into?

very interesting premise! I look forward to you exploring it.

I really enjoyed this story! Kinda wish we could've seen Greg and Victor's sex scene. Also, It would be awesome is there was a sequel, like the guys make Ollie touch a cursed item or some random other guys or police officiers find the warehouse later.

Heat in the comment section!! That’s a new one. …good? I guess? Who doesn’t want a bit of passion here and there? Just remember we’re all on the same side, and that side is “this is a successful series by our pal Naedre, and let’s not sully an author’s work by squabbling in the comment section of that work.” If y’all wanna go verbal fisty cuffs there’s already several venues for that; PMs, the site’s forum, the site chat rooms, or even discord!

A brilliant two chapters so far, very worthy of commendation! Your writing, your characters, the way the story flows naturally all work together very well. Great work, and a very strong contender for this challenge prompt!

Great transformation.

Damn everything was going so well until evil Christians and gay Muslims that I thought Biden bought the website for a second

You've offered to spoil the ultimate ending for people who were afraid of Brian, and I decided not to ask, despite feeling like the story is leading to Brian acquiring too much power. Ironic that the only time the story gave me hope re: Brian is with something that's even darker. Brian's wish at the end of last chapter really scared me, but with the three non-brainwashed good guys saying no, and with Riley's abilities (and addictive pre-cum), I'm getting hopeful (if the following chapters crushes me, please do it gently). Phenomenal series so far.

I...holy SHIT. This was INCREDIBLE. How did you *think* of this? What an amazing chapter! I deliberately waited until I had time to read it carefully, and it was 100% worth the wait. I absolutely love Noah and Joe revealing their pasts--if there was ever an example of the perfect balance of "showing and telling," you found it in the brief but succinct story that Joe tells about his father. We don't need a single word more to learn what happened to his mother. And Joe showing that he was truly the bigger person by not seeking revenge, despite having all the magic in the world at his disposal...THAT'S how you write a balanced character. (Similarly, I love how all three men instantly reject Brian's "alpha pheromones" wish as stupid and self-indulgent--it again helps to show Brian as an aberration in the new and balanced world you're creating). You also do a brilliant job at depicting reality changes--everyone's memories, and the world's policies, sliding into place in the new "Nerd cock as needed for jocks" version of the universe. I especially love the new take on Cinderella with jocks and nerds seeking each other's "perfect fit" out through sex, and how nerd/jock hybrids get to feel both desires at once! And I love the idea of preventing sexual assaulters, too. If I have one complaint about this chapter, it's the form that prevention takes--the idea of bottoming and submission as a "punishment" raised my hackles slightly. But you do such an amazing job outlining the difference between submission and mutual pleasure, of what it means to bottom for joy while having an equal power balance versus being forced into it like Brian does, that it's understandable. And then, good LORD, the Void. A brief but brilliant recap of the Spanish Inquisition, false Christians converting and torturing innocents in the name of God, and the *perfect* symbol of the bastardization of Islamic history--a white Christian stealing something from Islamic culture, modifying it for evil purposes, and using it to literally enslave a descendant of that culture...I mean, in all seriousness, how do you DO that? In just one short section you've given Javi an entire backstory while never sacrificing plot, forward motion, or the other characterizations (Tyler's transformation of himself into the knight of Javi's dreams and sacred vow to save the day was the perfect fairy-tale ending). I say this with all the seriousness I can muster, Naedre: you are truly a gifted writer. You've done something incredible here, and we're all so lucky to get the chance to read your work. From the bottom of my heart...thank you. :)

Hey, just a heads up that I had to reorganize the series designations a little bit, since it was causing glitches on the backend to have numerous 'chapter ones' in a single series (aka, the Gay Fairy Tales series). I hope this is alright on your end. Please let me know if not!