Recent Comments

6/30/24, 9:24 AM
Drones aren't really my thing, and usually I prefer to skip those stories, but I'm glad I read this one! You did an excellent job in writing and the idea is great. I didn't know this is the second chapter, so many things came to me as a twist, but it felt completely natural and I was sure at first that this was intended, so very well done! Waiting for the next chapter :)
6/30/24, 4:38 AM
Dronification usually isn’t my thing, but this is one of the hottest stories I’ve read in awhile.

6/30/24, 9:13 AM
@[texas95](/user/show/10020267) I'll echo that. This was such an amazing chapter.
6/30/24, 5:13 AM
I like Nick. Ray is about to have an interesting semester. Glad to see this new story from you. I'm always in awe of your storytelling. What will they transform into?
6/30/24, 4:32 AM
very interesting premise! I look forward to you exploring it.
7/29/21, 2:19 PM
I really enjoyed this story! Kinda wish we could've seen Greg and Victor's sex scene. Also, It would be awesome is there was a sequel, like the guys make Ollie touch a cursed item or some random other guys or police officiers find the warehouse later.

7/29/21, 3:46 PM
@Person Just Browsing that would be great

6/30/24, 3:03 AM
@[Person Just Browsing](/user/show/10002259) A very hot idea to have homophobic police officers find the warehouse. One could become a leather daddy bear type and lots of options for the others.
6/29/24, 10:06 PM
Heat in the comment section!! That’s a new one. …good? I guess? Who doesn’t want a bit of passion here and there? Just remember we’re all on the same side, and that side is “this is a successful series by our pal Naedre, and let’s not sully an author’s work by squabbling in the comment section of that work.” If y’all wanna go verbal fisty cuffs there’s already several venues for that; PMs, the site’s forum, the site chat rooms, or even discord!

6/30/24, 1:57 AM
@[The Dirty Spiders](/user/show/571676) I agree, the comment section of someone's chapters is not the place for that kind of discussion.
6/30/24, 1:49 AM
A brilliant two chapters so far, very worthy of commendation! Your writing, your characters, the way the story flows naturally all work together very well. Great work, and a very strong contender for this challenge prompt!
6/30/24, 1:44 AM
Great transformation.
Anon
6/28/24, 3:41 PM
Damn everything was going so well until evil Christians and gay Muslims that I thought Biden bought the website for a second

6/28/24, 3:52 PM
@[Anon](/user/show/910942) Fairly certain this is a joke, but to be clear, not ‘evil Christians.’ Evil Inquisitors. I am only taking the bold historical stance that the Spanish Inquisition was bad, actually.

Anon
6/28/24, 4:05 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) well as a judiciary system it was better than the previos one because it actually had a process and the king didn't just decide who was right and who was wrong. Like everything there is always a good and a bad side. But it's a heavy conversation we probably shouldn't have here

6/29/24, 6:22 PM
@[Anon](/user/show/910942) Then why’d you bring it up? lol Saying Colonialism was a generally bad move for humanity isn’t really controversial or… incorrect. Hindsight has taught us that.

Anonymous
6/29/24, 8:16 PM
@[Asisasio](/user/show/128107) I didn't bring it up? If anything I'm stopping the conversation saying we shouldn't discuss it here. And you are falling for the same thing saying "X was generally bad or something" so hindsight clearly didn't taught you anything at all

6/29/24, 8:20 PM
@Anonymous Trump, is it you? On a gay kink site?

Anonymous
6/29/24, 8:29 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) even as a joke, it's sad the current political climate is so fucked up you get labeled as a right winger for talking about history

6/29/24, 8:54 PM
@Anonymous You started it with your Biden comment, which was really unnecessary!

Anonymous
6/29/24, 9:04 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) It's impossible to read "gay Muslism being pursued by Christians" and not link it to current political ideologies. My comment was far from unnecessary, if anythign there should be more
6/29/24, 2:40 PM
You've offered to spoil the ultimate ending for people who were afraid of Brian, and I decided not to ask, despite feeling like the story is leading to Brian acquiring too much power. Ironic that the only time the story gave me hope re: Brian is with something that's even darker. Brian's wish at the end of last chapter really scared me, but with the three non-brainwashed good guys saying no, and with Riley's abilities (and addictive pre-cum), I'm getting hopeful (if the following chapters crushes me, please do it gently). Phenomenal series so far.