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7/2/24, 6:38 PM
Oh geez, this was hot! Just a couple of spots where the names got swapped, but still great.

Anonymous
7/2/24, 8:54 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Author here (from a guest account so as not to reveal my identity). I swear I proof read every story at least 3 times before hitting publish and yet there are always mistakes like this. It's like I go blind when reading my own stuff. If you have the time would you be so kind as to tell me where I've mixed up the names so I can edit it out? No problem if not, I'll find them myself eventually.

7/2/24, 9:23 PM
@Anonymous I only remember one place might have done that, but I did noticed you spelled David as Dafid once near the end. I'm assuming you can do a search to find that one, just thought since you were asking I'd add my own comment. It's okay though, I find mistakes in my writing all the damn time. Sometimes months later.

7/2/24, 10:28 PM
@Anonymous I think I saw it when they were watching the Power Rangers and David helped Keith take off his shirt.

7/2/24, 11:35 PM
@Anonymous "Keith, meanwhile, was cursing himself. He didn’t know whether Keith was actually so oblivious..." i think the first keith is david here.
7/2/24, 8:19 PM
Ugh reading that while in a cage was painful in the good way. I have to start using the phrase "cage-gasm" and look forward to reading more about gay supremacist societies. It was an excellent read, thank you.
7/2/24, 7:02 PM
So hot!!!!💖💖💖
Anonymous
7/2/24, 4:30 PM
Good story. want more.
Oct 2, 2020
Anonymous
10/11/20, 11:25 AM
Love the story, you write beautifully and speak English better than some people whose native tongue is English. I have one question though at the end right here" > I whined in protest, but I already felt him wiggling out from under me. Suddenly I was cold. I looked up at him as he was putting on his clothes. > “Jessica.” he started. “Uhm… They’re. They’re probably worried sick by now. We have to go back.” When Jason calls Matthew "Jessica", is that a typo and you meant to write "Matthew" and not the name of Jason's former GF, or did Matthew switch bodies with Jessica and become her in body and mind and so he's now Jessica, or is Matthew still Matthew but in Jason's mind he's Jessica? If you could clear that up for me that would be great. Keep on writing man.

Anonymous
7/2/24, 3:38 AM
@Anonymous Not the author, but my assumption was that Jason remembered Jessica and said her name in a sort of “Oh yeah! Jessica!” type of way, if that makes sense
7/2/24, 3:06 AM
Very interesting story!

7/2/24, 3:38 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thanks, man.
Apr 4, 2017
Anonymous
7/2/24, 1:24 AM
Good story but there’s a huge missed opportunity to title it “Build a Bear”
7/1/24, 8:08 AM
Lovely story. Erotic, romantic, and with some clever D&D based world building.

7/1/24, 7:45 PM
@[Zandramas](/user/show/10050408) Thanks! I could have used more original terminology but for a short story I thought I would just socket it into something that felt approachable.
7/1/24, 2:09 AM
what a fun story! I liked the dnd-ish lore, it's fun and engaging

7/1/24, 7:44 PM
@[gargayle](/user/show/10018766) Glad you liked it! I thought using some pseudo D&D terminology would help frame the story. After all, it seems like everybody has been playing Baldur's Gate 3 this year.
Preppyboyish
7/1/24, 11:54 AM
I love this story, it's making me horny and I want to dress preppy too now. I can't wait to see the next chapter.