Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/2/24, 5:42 AM
Wow… just wow…. The way you weave both love and lust is truly a blessing. Talent with every word you write. I tend to like shorter stories that are straight to the point but I do find the occasional gem (like this one) that manages to keep me reading till the end. Props!

7/3/24, 1:47 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! Very glad that my (very frenetic) pacing worked for you.
Xackery
7/2/24, 4:38 AM
HOLY FUCK HOLY FUCK HOLY FUCK HELLO??? HI??????? STRAIGHT 5S ACROSS THE BOARD WHAT THE FUCK THIS IS. THIS IS SO FUCKING SWEET WHAT THE FUCK. THIS IS SO SAPPY AND SWEET AND ROMANTIC AND HOT AND OH MY GOD. HEAD IN HANDS. HEAD IN HANDS. HOMY FUCK. HOLY FUCK. In other words, it was really good! Cant wait to see what else you wrote :3

7/3/24, 1:46 PM
@Xackery Thanks so much! Very glad you enjoyed it. Sappy and sweet is a particular weakness of mine haha
7/3/24, 4:07 AM
Come-inducingly hot and also just plain good writing. Excited to find out who this is.
7/2/24, 6:38 PM
Oh geez, this was hot! Just a couple of spots where the names got swapped, but still great.

Anonymous
7/2/24, 8:54 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Author here (from a guest account so as not to reveal my identity). I swear I proof read every story at least 3 times before hitting publish and yet there are always mistakes like this. It's like I go blind when reading my own stuff. If you have the time would you be so kind as to tell me where I've mixed up the names so I can edit it out? No problem if not, I'll find them myself eventually.

7/2/24, 9:23 PM
@Anonymous I only remember one place might have done that, but I did noticed you spelled David as Dafid once near the end. I'm assuming you can do a search to find that one, just thought since you were asking I'd add my own comment. It's okay though, I find mistakes in my writing all the damn time. Sometimes months later.

7/2/24, 10:28 PM
@Anonymous I think I saw it when they were watching the Power Rangers and David helped Keith take off his shirt.

7/2/24, 11:35 PM
@Anonymous "Keith, meanwhile, was cursing himself. He didn’t know whether Keith was actually so oblivious..." i think the first keith is david here.
7/2/24, 8:19 PM
Ugh reading that while in a cage was painful in the good way. I have to start using the phrase "cage-gasm" and look forward to reading more about gay supremacist societies. It was an excellent read, thank you.
7/2/24, 7:02 PM
So hot!!!!💖💖💖
Anonymous
7/2/24, 4:30 PM
Good story. want more.
Oct 2, 2020
Anonymous
10/11/20, 11:25 AM
Love the story, you write beautifully and speak English better than some people whose native tongue is English. I have one question though at the end right here" > I whined in protest, but I already felt him wiggling out from under me. Suddenly I was cold. I looked up at him as he was putting on his clothes. > “Jessica.” he started. “Uhm… They’re. They’re probably worried sick by now. We have to go back.” When Jason calls Matthew "Jessica", is that a typo and you meant to write "Matthew" and not the name of Jason's former GF, or did Matthew switch bodies with Jessica and become her in body and mind and so he's now Jessica, or is Matthew still Matthew but in Jason's mind he's Jessica? If you could clear that up for me that would be great. Keep on writing man.

Anonymous
7/2/24, 3:38 AM
@Anonymous Not the author, but my assumption was that Jason remembered Jessica and said her name in a sort of “Oh yeah! Jessica!” type of way, if that makes sense
7/2/24, 3:06 AM
Very interesting story!

7/2/24, 3:38 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thanks, man.
Apr 4, 2017
Anonymous
7/2/24, 1:24 AM
Good story but there’s a huge missed opportunity to title it “Build a Bear”