Recent Comments

7/4/24, 7:45 PM
I'm usually not particularly into dumbing down stories, I usually like when the recipient of the mind control/brainwashing is intelligent and even aware of what's going on but absolutely helpless to stop it. That being said, this has to be one of my favorites I've read in a long long time on this site, it's fun, it's sexy, it's creative and it's lighthearted as well! I'm very curious to see who wrote this when the challenge event ends!
7/3/24, 4:52 PM
WHY DID THIS ACTUALLY MAKE ME MIST UP A LITTLE 😭 Very well-done: hot, interesting from a science point of view, and very, VERY sweet!

7/3/24, 8:45 PM
@[Nevermaker](/user/show/381049) Someone getting a little teary eyed after reading this is the highest form of compliment I could ever ask for. Thanks so much for the kind words!
7/3/24, 7:41 PM
This is one of the hottest prelude stories I’ve read here. You’ve managed to do world-building that isn’t boring or tedious. I can’t wait to see what happens next!
7/3/24, 6:02 PM
Love this so far! Can’t wait for more.
7/3/24, 2:09 PM
Nice. Highly erotic and inventive.

Anonymous
7/3/24, 3:18 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Thank you. The best is yet to come.
7/3/24, 3:11 PM
Truly excelent work! A new favorite for sure. I think there's even a potential for a sequel probably, exploring this couple after quarantine ended, or maybe learning more about the real Dr. D (either through these two or another subject).
Anonymous
7/2/24, 5:42 AM
Wow… just wow…. The way you weave both love and lust is truly a blessing. Talent with every word you write. I tend to like shorter stories that are straight to the point but I do find the occasional gem (like this one) that manages to keep me reading till the end. Props!

7/3/24, 1:47 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! Very glad that my (very frenetic) pacing worked for you.
Xackery
7/2/24, 4:38 AM
HOLY FUCK HOLY FUCK HOLY FUCK HELLO??? HI??????? STRAIGHT 5S ACROSS THE BOARD WHAT THE FUCK THIS IS. THIS IS SO FUCKING SWEET WHAT THE FUCK. THIS IS SO SAPPY AND SWEET AND ROMANTIC AND HOT AND OH MY GOD. HEAD IN HANDS. HEAD IN HANDS. HOMY FUCK. HOLY FUCK. In other words, it was really good! Cant wait to see what else you wrote :3

7/3/24, 1:46 PM
@Xackery Thanks so much! Very glad you enjoyed it. Sappy and sweet is a particular weakness of mine haha
7/3/24, 4:07 AM
Come-inducingly hot and also just plain good writing. Excited to find out who this is.
7/2/24, 6:38 PM
Oh geez, this was hot! Just a couple of spots where the names got swapped, but still great.

Anonymous
7/2/24, 8:54 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Author here (from a guest account so as not to reveal my identity). I swear I proof read every story at least 3 times before hitting publish and yet there are always mistakes like this. It's like I go blind when reading my own stuff. If you have the time would you be so kind as to tell me where I've mixed up the names so I can edit it out? No problem if not, I'll find them myself eventually.

7/2/24, 9:23 PM
@Anonymous I only remember one place might have done that, but I did noticed you spelled David as Dafid once near the end. I'm assuming you can do a search to find that one, just thought since you were asking I'd add my own comment. It's okay though, I find mistakes in my writing all the damn time. Sometimes months later.

7/2/24, 10:28 PM
@Anonymous I think I saw it when they were watching the Power Rangers and David helped Keith take off his shirt.

7/2/24, 11:35 PM
@Anonymous "Keith, meanwhile, was cursing himself. He didn’t know whether Keith was actually so oblivious..." i think the first keith is david here.