Recent Comments

7/5/24, 12:04 PM
This is the only drone story I’ve ever really clicked with. Amazing job, man! A good source of plot conflict would be a rogue unit! Some sort of “mutation” or error code that makes it unable to respond to the Prime and spread some sort of corrupting influence to other drones and/or civilians. That opens up lots of drone designations. You can have dedicated “soldier” and “infiltrator” castes as the war between the two drone swarms heats up! Obviously Alex’s swarm is ultimately victorious, but there could be a lot of juice in a conflict
Thom
7/4/24, 11:30 PM
Just found this! Wonderful story!!
7/4/24, 7:45 PM
I'm usually not particularly into dumbing down stories, I usually like when the recipient of the mind control/brainwashing is intelligent and even aware of what's going on but absolutely helpless to stop it. That being said, this has to be one of my favorites I've read in a long long time on this site, it's fun, it's sexy, it's creative and it's lighthearted as well! I'm very curious to see who wrote this when the challenge event ends!
7/3/24, 4:52 PM
WHY DID THIS ACTUALLY MAKE ME MIST UP A LITTLE 😭 Very well-done: hot, interesting from a science point of view, and very, VERY sweet!

7/3/24, 8:45 PM
@[Nevermaker](/user/show/381049) Someone getting a little teary eyed after reading this is the highest form of compliment I could ever ask for. Thanks so much for the kind words!
7/3/24, 7:41 PM
This is one of the hottest prelude stories I’ve read here. You’ve managed to do world-building that isn’t boring or tedious. I can’t wait to see what happens next!
7/3/24, 6:02 PM
Love this so far! Can’t wait for more.
7/3/24, 2:09 PM
Nice. Highly erotic and inventive.

Anonymous
7/3/24, 3:18 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Thank you. The best is yet to come.
7/3/24, 3:11 PM
Truly excelent work! A new favorite for sure. I think there's even a potential for a sequel probably, exploring this couple after quarantine ended, or maybe learning more about the real Dr. D (either through these two or another subject).
Anonymous
7/2/24, 5:42 AM
Wow… just wow…. The way you weave both love and lust is truly a blessing. Talent with every word you write. I tend to like shorter stories that are straight to the point but I do find the occasional gem (like this one) that manages to keep me reading till the end. Props!

7/3/24, 1:47 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! Very glad that my (very frenetic) pacing worked for you.
Xackery
7/2/24, 4:38 AM
HOLY FUCK HOLY FUCK HOLY FUCK HELLO??? HI??????? STRAIGHT 5S ACROSS THE BOARD WHAT THE FUCK THIS IS. THIS IS SO FUCKING SWEET WHAT THE FUCK. THIS IS SO SAPPY AND SWEET AND ROMANTIC AND HOT AND OH MY GOD. HEAD IN HANDS. HEAD IN HANDS. HOMY FUCK. HOLY FUCK. In other words, it was really good! Cant wait to see what else you wrote :3

7/3/24, 1:46 PM
@Xackery Thanks so much! Very glad you enjoyed it. Sappy and sweet is a particular weakness of mine haha