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Anonymous
7/5/24, 7:11 PM
im so excited to see the writer who wrote this hope they have more like this
7/5/24, 6:25 PM
Yeah kind of figured it was headed this way. Got so caught up trying to play 4D chess that he checkmated himself instead.
7/5/24, 4:58 PM
Fucking glorious, man!
Zi
7/5/24, 4:20 PM
Oh that role reversal tag, I've been waiting for that for awhile now. Love this!
7/5/24, 3:44 PM
Looking forward to the full moon
7/5/24, 3:08 PM
Ohh this never stops being hot. Such a fun downfall for Brian, can't wait for the boys to find him...
7/5/24, 2:32 PM
Awesome! Brian getting what he deserves!
Anonymous
7/5/24, 12:39 PM
Part 2?
7/5/24, 12:04 PM
This is the only drone story I’ve ever really clicked with. Amazing job, man! A good source of plot conflict would be a rogue unit! Some sort of “mutation” or error code that makes it unable to respond to the Prime and spread some sort of corrupting influence to other drones and/or civilians. That opens up lots of drone designations. You can have dedicated “soldier” and “infiltrator” castes as the war between the two drone swarms heats up! Obviously Alex’s swarm is ultimately victorious, but there could be a lot of juice in a conflict
Thom
7/4/24, 11:30 PM
Just found this! Wonderful story!!