Recent Comments

7/8/24, 11:05 AM
*contented sigh* beautiful. inspirational. awesome. All that's been said in this thread, doubled. We are fortunate to have you. This chapter, this story, makes me remember why I'm in this gig and why I stick around... Thank you so much for writing and for sharing your work with us. 🙏😎
Jun 21, 2024
7/8/24, 1:56 AM
DAMN this is a hot story, Kyle! Fantastic concept and very well written! I can't wait to read your story for our little competition with Ty! 🥰
7/7/24, 5:18 PM
It's like ninety degrees here but I felt the chill reading this, great mood setting. I'm a sucker for a bit of romance!

7/7/24, 6:10 PM
@[Mostly Ghostly](/user/show/10041149) Thanks! I’m a bit of a sucker for romance too (ironic given what else I’ve written). I don’t expect this story to get much attention or likes or… whatever but I thought it’d be funny to do a complete 180. I might even write more romance when I’m in the mood. Who knows? :cupid:
7/7/24, 6:32 AM
Wow did I last read this on NCMC? I'm so happy for the revision and continuation!

7/7/24, 6:41 AM
@[AutoAhegao](/user/show/112610) Oh I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm still working on this series but I paused to do some other material.
Lookintomyeyesboy.
7/6/24, 6:05 PM
BTW, someone in the last chapter floated the theory that the trapped tempter would be Matt's dad, and I have to say, you were right... in the first draft. That was my original idea, but in the second rewrite it felt like it didn't fit the way I wanted to. I admit, in terms of drama it kinda works, but it just doesn't fit right to the rest of the story. But yeah, you read my mind. I just changed it afterwards.
J
7/6/24, 4:35 PM
Thank you for the story
7/6/24, 1:52 PM
I'm a bit bummed Brian lost, cuz I like an evil dude taking over haha, but Riley's revenge is sweet as well!

7/6/24, 2:20 PM
@[TurkeyVulture](/user/show/897890) Well, next week is the last Lamphouse chapter, but the week after that, I have a short story that might interest you then. "Bad guy winning" is always subjective, but the story is called "Did You Hypnotize Me?" and is set to publish 7/19. I think it is something you would enjoy. :)
7/6/24, 11:55 AM
Oh the sweet sweet scent of poetic justice (pun very much intended). This chapter was hot as hell! As someone who's struggling to bottom but still has a very strong bottoms bitch kink, this chapter was just *chef's kiss*. A good endic by poetic justice? Check. Hot submission talk by the Dom? Check. Heartfelt closure (or at least the beginning of one) for the original good boy? Check. I really wonder how this story is going to end, especially if you decide to go with a split ending option. I hope that in the good ending you'll make sure to fix all of the damage that Brian had caused, including the one made to the guys from the bachelor party. Excited for the next chapter and for plenty of wholesome bitching sex scenes!
7/5/24, 7:36 PM
I love how character driven this has been. Lots of rings, fogs, devices, genie stories but few stories progress from the wants and downfalls of people. I also love the "not everything has to be your responsibility" Can't wait for the next one :)

7/6/24, 3:24 AM
@[AutoAhegao](/user/show/112610) As @[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) commented on in an earlier chapter, lots of Brian's relationship with Riley is reflective of an abusive relationship. The isolating, the gaslighting, the erasure of his identity outside of the abusive partner. And its incredibly hard to 'save' someone from an abusive relationship. You can't force someone to break up with an abuser. They have to recognize it for themselves. So absolutely the best thing you can do is be their beacon, their support, their advisor, and let them know that if/when their relationship with their abuser ends, you will be there to pick up the pieces no matter what. Without judgement. That's Tyler. "not everything has to be your responsibility" is true. And sometimes you have to let people save themselves.

7/6/24, 9:27 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Just want to say that this comment made me absolutely cry. As someone who dealt with a friend who was trapped in an abusive relationship, it's so true. Watching him be gaslit and isolated was horrific, and all any of us could do was be there for him and wait; as you say, we knew we couldn't force them to split up, that just deepened the abuser's control. My friend is much better now--he broke up with that guy and is now living his best life. This story has been a reminder of him...thank you for that. :)
7/6/24, 4:52 AM
Man do you have me totally hooked on your stories bro. Love them all and this one is especially addictive. Can't wait to read the conclusion I'm sure it'll be killer. Love that Brian finally got bitched and has accepted what he really is and wanted all along. Noticed how you snuck his true desire into the hypnosis scene 😈 with a simple question and a very simple quick reply. Nothing better than vocalizing what you're true desires are. I'm sure Brian is really thankful in the end how good his hole feels and what a good bitch he's going to strive to be for ALL cocks.