Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/9/24, 9:09 PM
Very nice :) I wasn't the only one to detect a hint of flirting between these characters in ep 1 then!

Zander
7/10/24, 3:31 PM
@Anonymous in the books there are more interesting versions between their relationships 😅)

7/10/24, 4:15 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) This 3-chapter story is about Jace and Cregan's relationship, but I would certainly read a story you wrote about Daemon being made a good boy. :) And yeah, I sort of intentionally muddled the show and the book. In the book, Jace and Cregan become instant 'intimate friends' and swear a blood oath to each other. In the book, it is an oath of 'brotherhood.' The books also say that there are 'wild and unreliable' rumors that Jace had a relationship with Sara Snow, which upset Cregan, until Cregan learns Jace married Sara in a secret ceremony in the godswood. Of course, even the most unreliable rumors may have a toehold in the truth. Perhaps Jace married Cregan in the godswood, in secret, and Sara was a convenient cover. ;)

Zander
7/10/24, 5:40 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Yes, it’s all about books) I’m really looking forward to the release of new chapters and whether in this version Kreegan will be the right hand and fuck Jace on the Iron Throne) Yes, Damon deserves a good Master to subdue him.)
Zander
7/10/24, 3:29 PM
Great story, I hope there will be a continuation. I hope someone writes a story about how someone puts Daemon Targaryen in his place and dominates him, turning him into a whore.
7/10/24, 1:21 PM
I desperately need a "heart" rating category for this. PLEASE x-publish this to Cupid! PLEASE!
7/8/24, 7:44 PM
A wonderful and lovely story. Thank you!
7/8/24, 11:05 AM
*contented sigh* beautiful. inspirational. awesome. All that's been said in this thread, doubled. We are fortunate to have you. This chapter, this story, makes me remember why I'm in this gig and why I stick around... Thank you so much for writing and for sharing your work with us. 🙏😎
Jun 21, 2024
7/8/24, 1:56 AM
DAMN this is a hot story, Kyle! Fantastic concept and very well written! I can't wait to read your story for our little competition with Ty! 🥰
7/7/24, 5:18 PM
It's like ninety degrees here but I felt the chill reading this, great mood setting. I'm a sucker for a bit of romance!

7/7/24, 6:10 PM
@[Mostly Ghostly](/user/show/10041149) Thanks! I’m a bit of a sucker for romance too (ironic given what else I’ve written). I don’t expect this story to get much attention or likes or… whatever but I thought it’d be funny to do a complete 180. I might even write more romance when I’m in the mood. Who knows? :cupid:
7/7/24, 6:32 AM
Wow did I last read this on NCMC? I'm so happy for the revision and continuation!

7/7/24, 6:41 AM
@[AutoAhegao](/user/show/112610) Oh I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm still working on this series but I paused to do some other material.
Lookintomyeyesboy.
7/6/24, 6:05 PM
BTW, someone in the last chapter floated the theory that the trapped tempter would be Matt's dad, and I have to say, you were right... in the first draft. That was my original idea, but in the second rewrite it felt like it didn't fit the way I wanted to. I admit, in terms of drama it kinda works, but it just doesn't fit right to the rest of the story. But yeah, you read my mind. I just changed it afterwards.
J
7/6/24, 4:35 PM
Thank you for the story