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7/15/24, 8:38 AM
HOTTTTT! This is high quality stuff right here! So happy you’re writing this. Love love love the gamma designation and all the personality that they have. And all the fun that we get to enjoy by also having Alpha Charlie’s POV. It’s everything I’ve wanted from ASFR.
7/14/24, 8:08 PM
This is a great series. I absolutely love it.
6/30/24, 6:44 AM
I second texas95. I'm usually not into drone stories but this one's hitting all my buttons so far. Really fantastic work, and I'd love to see a progression as Alex either corrals all the drones into a big harem for himself or, well, this becomes a worldchange story. Also, was it intentional for the characters to have A, B, and C names? Alpha Alex, Beta Brody, Gamma Charlie.

7/1/24, 2:07 PM
@[Fred W. Kong](/user/show/476663) Yeah, the names thing was some fun I was having, but I feel like I have to go away from it soon, as it is fairly restricting instead of fun, and also the drones can change designation upon orders from an alpha/Prime. Like Charlie is now temporarily an Alpha unit to go collect William Cook, but he isn't changing his name to 'Arlie. ;)

7/3/24, 7:53 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Oh I can't believe I missed the name thing! I was trying to decipher the serial numbering system. If I understood it correctly, Silas is the third person to be converted, hence the 003. Then Connor was the 142nd person to be converted by Silas, thus 003-142. But if that is true, then that means that Brody is the second person to be converted by Connor, so who is the first one? Also, I wonder if there's a meaning to that both Alex's and Silas' SN share the same "section" (for a lack of a better word), since if I got it correctly, each generation is defined by a new section. Then again, I might be looking way too into that.

7/3/24, 8:12 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Unit-003-142-001 is William Cook, the focus of the next chapter. See here: > “Brody, stop. I got this,” Conner said. “Basically everyone in the fraternity, Sir. And three guys in Tau Epsilon Tau. And this cute guy in my History class; his name was William Cook, I think....He was my first convert, Prime, before even Brody. Not exactly sure what sure what you mean by "SN" or "section" here, but if you mean that Alex is Unit-001 and all his converts are Units-00X instead of Units-001-00X, there was no expectation that anyone other than Alex would be injected with nanos directly, so Alex and everyone he creates is a "first generation" drone, while every generation after marks their first gen progenitor. We shall see if that assumption is correct. What happens if there are two Unit-001s out there? Also, the next chapter is going to be the last one inside the contest window, but I do want to continue this concept. Anyone with suggestions on where the story might go is welcome to share. I have a rough idea of some things, but it's early enough that suggestions will definitely help shape the story. Plot suggestions, or what other drone designations do is all helpful. For example, what is a Delta unit? A Epsilon unit? Etc.

7/6/24, 5:22 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I really want to see the new designations be the different personae that Charlie detected in Alex's fantasies. Especially considering that the drones can transform their bodies over time, they could change to suit whatever new designation Alex creates to suit different purposes, like bottoming, fitting a stereotype, or gaining kink-related traits like inhuman body configurations or external features. As an event in the story, I would love to see Alex figure out how to link with the drones without speech, especially as the collective grows. Would his will continue to control all the others once networked, or would their collective devotion (and the nanites' desire to spread) overwhelm his self-control?

Anonymous
7/14/24, 6:12 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I've loved reading about the one-on-one dynamics between the drones but I'd also be interested to see how Prime handles the converted frat boys and deals with an entire group of drones that want to serve him.
Anonymous
7/14/24, 6:03 PM
Wow, what an excellent chapter. I love how you've explored different perspectives in each chapter. Would be interesting to see what happens when Prime is able to get all of his drones together.
Anonymous
7/14/24, 5:59 PM
Great chapter! Very excited to see this story continue and looking forward to more!
7/13/24, 5:01 PM
I'm so into RPG and the D&D terms added to the hotness of the story. Great job, author!

7/14/24, 2:54 AM
@[PaladinJock](/user/show/10052351) Thanks! Part two has been submitted so hopefully you'll be able to see it very soon.
7/14/24, 12:49 AM
Not really rooting for Alex at this point, feels like he's kinda starting to cross some lines and I'm worried he might be one of those people who would be just as bad as his tormentors if the roles were reversed.

Anonymous
7/14/24, 12:59 AM
@[Mostly Ghostly](/user/show/10041149) Not really. He’s just being a spazz. Or maybe… Kinda? They are just kids, not just Alex. In THIS situation, the roles are reversed, and while they’re doing things not quite to the agreement, it’s still within some semblance of consent… Sort of. Just about anybody would be willing to take up actions with reversed roles, but that’s a philosophical discussion that would be going in a lot deeper than just a story about kink and bully fetish.
7/13/24, 8:55 PM
A marvelous ending to a marvelous story! When I imagined the ending for Brian I didn't consider a genuine chance for a redemption arc, which makes me much more appreciative of your choice. It's uncommon in erotic stories, hell, it's uncommon in regular stories, so kudos to you. At the end I thought about that, on the macro, the A plot is Tyler and Javi vs Brian and slave Riley in battle of brains (and cock) for freedom, justice and love, while the B plot is Noah and Joe on a quest to make the world a better place by turning it into a global orgy. Of course it's more complicated than that, and definitely not a bad thing, but I just found it amusing and felt clever pointing it out. The only thing I felt missing from the plot is the restoration of the lives of to British folks who's lives Brian had destroyed because they dared existing. One last thing I would like to mention is that I really loved Javi's character development. He was always sweet and caring, but as he became more independent and sassy he became more fun and a "djin fatal". If you ever decide to do a spin off, I would definitely like to read about Javi travelling the world and serving some sexy wholesome justice.
7/13/24, 7:09 PM
Neeeeeed more!! This is great thanks for sharing.

7/13/24, 8:45 PM
@[Furrybttm40](/user/show/10010813) Thank you. It means a lot. Glad you like it. More to come.
Anonymous
7/12/24, 3:02 PM
"I dont think this story needs a sequel" he says and proceeds to drop the biggest cliffhanger. ! This story was great from start to finish! Thank you for sharing it

7/12/24, 3:06 PM
@Anonymous Mwhahahahah! Perhaps *I* was the villain the whole time! But seriously, I said what I wanted to say via this story, so thematically it doesn't need a sequel. But I do hate closing off worlds. Every story goes ever onwards, and so does this one. I might return to it when inspiration hits. :)

Anonymous
7/12/24, 4:48 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) I hope inspiration will hit you some day. I want to see what happens to Brian and see the doctor get his just desserts!

7/13/24, 8:32 PM
@Anonymous Exactly!