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7/16/24, 8:01 AM
Was so happy to see this story continue. And wow, the plot twist of Laurent at the end….i can only imagine what kind of deal could be reach

7/16/24, 1:35 PM
@[SabastionStorm](/user/show/910642) Glad you enjoyed it!
7/14/24, 5:46 PM
This series is great. Very well written, great attention to detail, and the concept is totally hot. I enjoyed both the previous chapters very much, and I love the setup here for a potential future conflict. It’s a shame that you don’t feel like you’ll get more chapters in before the close of the competition, but I hope you do continue the series later. I’m dying to see where you go with this. You’re hitting all the right vibes. And your writing style feels familiar, but maybe I’m imagining it. Either way: A+, gold star, 10 points for Gryffindor, take a cookie, etc, etc. :star_struck:

7/16/24, 12:19 PM
@[Perpetually Erect](/user/show/10018717) Your praise is way better than I could ever write it myself. I simply want to repeat everything you've just written!
7/16/24, 8:46 AM
Ha! Oh that was brilliant. Yet more plot complications for the drones to try to contain.
7/16/24, 1:59 AM
Is that a plot I detect? Very exciting, looking forward to the next part! I'm definitely a fan of the world building you're doing, it's quite intriguing :)
7/15/24, 11:53 PM
I'm so glad that one guy from a few chapters back finally found somebody who can un-fuck his mind after however many years it's been... I had this terrible breakup and I relate to that man hard because it actually takes that long to "get over" someone like that, and the smallest things can throw you back down into that cold and lonely place.
7/15/24, 8:05 PM
Holy crap, just finished this epic story. Goodness, you are talented!! Engaging, exciting, plot twists, and heartfelt. Bravo!!!
7/15/24, 7:19 PM
I feel like how the drones wirk is getting tweaked a bit each chapter even if we DO get explanations that fit somewhat. *Very* hot. Oh my, excited to see where this is going.
7/15/24, 10:14 AM
The way my jaw dropped lol. Enjoyed this part a lot. Thanks!

7/15/24, 1:34 PM
@[g472](/user/show/10015424) Let me cast Feather Fall on your jaw, wouldn't want you to take falling damage. Which part caused it though?
7/15/24, 8:38 AM
HOTTTTT! This is high quality stuff right here! So happy you’re writing this. Love love love the gamma designation and all the personality that they have. And all the fun that we get to enjoy by also having Alpha Charlie’s POV. It’s everything I’ve wanted from ASFR.
7/14/24, 8:08 PM
This is a great series. I absolutely love it.