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7/15/24, 4:20 PM
Also I bought the Amazon story. Ooh sexy. Nice connection to this. What an interesting world. Lots of fun to be had!

7/15/24, 11:41 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) That's awesome - thanks! Hope ya like it! And I'm excited about the story arc - I'm going to try to do some creative sexy things with religious taboos and diametrically-opposed paladin-witch powers!

7/16/24, 8:33 PM
@[Colin DV](/user/show/10038060) Yeah it was a really good story! Very enjoyable. The end of it was 'wow'. Also the son was a nice touch, as well as the guy from here. But yeah the end was very interesting. I also really like the Father nature of the religion, or like how Mother and Father and his magic is Father and such. Paladin-witch powers being utilized in new and sexy ways is totally fun. Also I hope the paladin comes to love his new 'daddy' hahaha. Such a great set up!
7/15/24, 3:24 PM
This was extremely hot amd sexy. Love the world building and the magic and the pov. Sooo good. Too bad he didn't rim the man, but maybe that could come. Hehe But yeah once he realizes what his magic can do, ooh boy so much potential in turning dudes into his good boys.

7/15/24, 11:42 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Oh, my dude, my witch is still learning the ropes, with no teacher! But the rimming will come - trust! ;)

7/16/24, 8:31 PM
@[Colin DV](/user/show/10038060) Very awesome! Also hot and sexy! Also I wonder if he can use his magic to enhance the body and mind of his targets. Turning people into wanton creamers. hehe Like I get him leaving the village but there is so much fun in the potential of making 'good boys' out of the villagers around him. Addicting them to his fuck and his filling them.
7/16/24, 8:01 AM
Was so happy to see this story continue. And wow, the plot twist of Laurent at the end….i can only imagine what kind of deal could be reach

7/16/24, 1:35 PM
@[SabastionStorm](/user/show/910642) Glad you enjoyed it!
7/14/24, 5:46 PM
This series is great. Very well written, great attention to detail, and the concept is totally hot. I enjoyed both the previous chapters very much, and I love the setup here for a potential future conflict. It’s a shame that you don’t feel like you’ll get more chapters in before the close of the competition, but I hope you do continue the series later. I’m dying to see where you go with this. You’re hitting all the right vibes. And your writing style feels familiar, but maybe I’m imagining it. Either way: A+, gold star, 10 points for Gryffindor, take a cookie, etc, etc. :star_struck:

7/16/24, 12:19 PM
@[Perpetually Erect](/user/show/10018717) Your praise is way better than I could ever write it myself. I simply want to repeat everything you've just written!
7/16/24, 8:46 AM
Ha! Oh that was brilliant. Yet more plot complications for the drones to try to contain.
7/16/24, 1:59 AM
Is that a plot I detect? Very exciting, looking forward to the next part! I'm definitely a fan of the world building you're doing, it's quite intriguing :)
7/15/24, 11:53 PM
I'm so glad that one guy from a few chapters back finally found somebody who can un-fuck his mind after however many years it's been... I had this terrible breakup and I relate to that man hard because it actually takes that long to "get over" someone like that, and the smallest things can throw you back down into that cold and lonely place.
7/15/24, 8:05 PM
Holy crap, just finished this epic story. Goodness, you are talented!! Engaging, exciting, plot twists, and heartfelt. Bravo!!!
7/15/24, 7:19 PM
I feel like how the drones wirk is getting tweaked a bit each chapter even if we DO get explanations that fit somewhat. *Very* hot. Oh my, excited to see where this is going.
7/15/24, 10:14 AM
The way my jaw dropped lol. Enjoyed this part a lot. Thanks!

7/15/24, 1:34 PM
@[g472](/user/show/10015424) Let me cast Feather Fall on your jaw, wouldn't want you to take falling damage. Which part caused it though?