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7/18/24, 5:18 PM
Bought the book. Can’t wait for the sequel!

7/19/24, 5:56 PM
@[rojohber](/user/show/149379) Thanks, bud! Feel free to share what parts/characters you like - helps me with story development. ;)

7/19/24, 6:00 PM
@[Colin DV](/user/show/10038060) Oh fuck yeah. Well, I love the whole concept of “role reversal” and “small Dom big sub” kinda vibes. The idea that fucking is a normal kinda form of payment; that it’s not supposed to be enjoyed; that this big “powerful” man is supposed to hate it, but ends up enjoying it, and actually loves it and deeply wants that and is both kinda confident with it yet still bothered by it. That he still asks for the 2 coin in payment!! Hah! (And later in your book - the idea of “creating” what kinda feels like a thrall or otherwise slave / submissive figure - and it’s this hot jocky dad with a personality that’s way more powerful than you (in some sense)??? Fucking hot. Love it. Cherish it.
Zander
7/19/24, 10:32 AM
Thank you very much for continuing this story. I hope the next chapter will come out as soon as this one.
7/18/24, 9:07 AM
First real lover... second spot... i see i see. Hmm, 6th sense, 7th heaven, twelfth night, 72nd Infantry... Wonderful story as always!

7/19/24, 12:17 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Three... Is a magic number.
7/17/24, 9:55 PM
OMGOMGOMG!!!!!! 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
Anonymous
7/17/24, 4:38 PM
Story is so good I jacked off to it a million times

7/17/24, 4:49 PM
@Anonymous The highest praise! Thanks!
Anonymous
7/17/24, 4:46 PM
Love this and hope lance get more wedgies and does it to himself and maybe other jocks! Hope for more soon
7/15/24, 4:20 PM
Also I bought the Amazon story. Ooh sexy. Nice connection to this. What an interesting world. Lots of fun to be had!

7/15/24, 11:41 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) That's awesome - thanks! Hope ya like it! And I'm excited about the story arc - I'm going to try to do some creative sexy things with religious taboos and diametrically-opposed paladin-witch powers!

7/16/24, 8:33 PM
@[Colin DV](/user/show/10038060) Yeah it was a really good story! Very enjoyable. The end of it was 'wow'. Also the son was a nice touch, as well as the guy from here. But yeah the end was very interesting. I also really like the Father nature of the religion, or like how Mother and Father and his magic is Father and such. Paladin-witch powers being utilized in new and sexy ways is totally fun. Also I hope the paladin comes to love his new 'daddy' hahaha. Such a great set up!
7/15/24, 3:24 PM
This was extremely hot amd sexy. Love the world building and the magic and the pov. Sooo good. Too bad he didn't rim the man, but maybe that could come. Hehe But yeah once he realizes what his magic can do, ooh boy so much potential in turning dudes into his good boys.

7/15/24, 11:42 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Oh, my dude, my witch is still learning the ropes, with no teacher! But the rimming will come - trust! ;)

7/16/24, 8:31 PM
@[Colin DV](/user/show/10038060) Very awesome! Also hot and sexy! Also I wonder if he can use his magic to enhance the body and mind of his targets. Turning people into wanton creamers. hehe Like I get him leaving the village but there is so much fun in the potential of making 'good boys' out of the villagers around him. Addicting them to his fuck and his filling them.
7/16/24, 8:01 AM
Was so happy to see this story continue. And wow, the plot twist of Laurent at the end….i can only imagine what kind of deal could be reach

7/16/24, 1:35 PM
@[SabastionStorm](/user/show/910642) Glad you enjoyed it!
7/14/24, 5:46 PM
This series is great. Very well written, great attention to detail, and the concept is totally hot. I enjoyed both the previous chapters very much, and I love the setup here for a potential future conflict. It’s a shame that you don’t feel like you’ll get more chapters in before the close of the competition, but I hope you do continue the series later. I’m dying to see where you go with this. You’re hitting all the right vibes. And your writing style feels familiar, but maybe I’m imagining it. Either way: A+, gold star, 10 points for Gryffindor, take a cookie, etc, etc. :star_struck:

7/16/24, 12:19 PM
@[Perpetually Erect](/user/show/10018717) Your praise is way better than I could ever write it myself. I simply want to repeat everything you've just written!