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7/18/24, 9:19 PM
The ideas were really fun and the sex scene are hot... but the overall execution wasn't the best. Was confused a bit, hopefully part 2 makes it easier to understand.

9/16/24, 3:54 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Sorry for the reaallllllyyy late reply 😓 Admittedly, the execution could’ve been better but I tanked it a bit. I was in a slump and wanted to let off some steam with some comedy… that’s probably why it reads a bit jumbled. For the most part, I wanted to write some lore (and by extension have an excuse to world build and poke fun at myself). I wasn’t sure if I would continue with this one so I did story beats out of order. Thinking back on it, it would’ve been best to start with the usual introduction then get some steam going. I’m on a writing break as of now but that may change closer towards Halloween. I have drafts for another story I’d written before my break that relates to this one (plus another story that I’ve already written) so I’ll have to see if I can get the motivation to finish this before then. Also, thanks for the constructive criticism! If/when I write a part 2, it’ll hopefully clear some stuff up.
Anonymous
9/15/24, 7:53 PM
i’ve been trying to find this derek story but i can’t find it anywhere! do you have a link or something?

9/15/24, 8:37 PM
@Anonymous https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/college/jock-buddy/
9/15/24, 8:37 PM
Hey, everyone, thank you so much for the kind words about the story and for supporting me, it really means a lot :) for everyone asking, here is the link for Jock Buddy (apologies, but the author’s name is Derek Philips, not Derek Williams lol), enjoy! https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/college/jock-buddy/
HypnoMutt
9/15/24, 3:35 AM
Yes, by all means, continue with these characters and the world you've created! You've got a rich milieu filled with distinct, memorable characters and a solid concept, beautifully executed. Lots of potential here. Excellent chapter in every regard, hot AF, sets up your conclusion nicely. Can't wait!

9/15/24, 8:32 PM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10023035) Very kind and welcome words indeed. Not a lot of people in my real life can/will read my work (admittedly, it is niche). The worst feeling is sending these chapters off into the ether and feeling like it is just being dropped into a black hole. A simple kind work like this sends my writing enthusiasm up to an "11" on the dial. Working on the final chapter of this novela now, and outlining the next novela. May Luna bless you, HypnoMutt.
StormRaven1217
7/17/24, 2:53 PM
I loved this story as I loved the Amazon book. As always, your worldbuilding is incomparable. Looking forward to book 2!

7/17/24, 3:06 PM
@StormRaven1217 Hey, thanks! That's so great to hear - I'm working hard on book 2 now! ;)

Ifan
9/15/24, 5:55 PM
@[Colin DV](/user/show/10038060) cant wait :D
9/15/24, 2:57 PM
👍👍👍👍. Another great one.
Anonymous
9/14/24, 7:39 PM
Please please please! Update this story
9/14/24, 9:34 AM
God this just keeps getting hotter. I loved the scene with Zach and damn, was everything that happened with Carlos hot!

9/14/24, 3:06 PM
@[GoodBoyPuppy](/user/show/10028663) Thank you. Working hard at it. I really appreciate your compliments.
Anonymous
9/14/24, 12:17 AM
This story reads as if Tyler was violated by Mark, which is not legally true in this case. This story shows a lack of confidence on behalf of all of the characters, and reinforces the patriarchal values of Johnathan to the detriment of all three men.
9/13/24, 8:39 PM
This is one of the hottest stories I've read in a long time. Please, keep going.