Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/18/24, 7:24 PM
Fantastic story; one of the best I've read here! Funny and hot and romantic, all brought together by your delightful style. Excellent job!

8/14/24, 4:54 AM
@Anonymous Thank you very much!
7/16/24, 1:05 AM
Wow. That was one of the finest erotic stories I've ever read. I really like intelligence with my erotic braintickling. Not to mention skillful writing and interesting thought-out characters. All the nice things said above - me, too. But in my case, I could humbly ask for some thinning out of the super-technical computer nerdfood section. It got so complicated that I just started to feel lost and afraid I'd have to give up and pass on the rest of the story. :-( I had to just...skim, hoping that the stuff for us non-programmers would poke through again, which it happily did. Perhaps keep all the What was done and Why but a lot less of the granular How? Anyway, something to consider for a possible next edit? Bravo!

8/14/24, 4:54 AM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) Noted! On re-reading I do understand how it can be overwhelming jargon-wise. I'm a bit of a hard sci-fi geek and I think I approached it with just a touch too much of assumed knowledge. Part of the reason I had some cryptic mentions of YouTube videos (all of which are real!) was to try give some background info in case that area was entirely unfamiliar, but if I ever revisit this story this is definitely a critique I'll be following up on. Thank you for the kind words and for your perspective!
7/4/24, 5:07 PM
Very hot - and sweet - reality change story. I usually get off on the "meaner" side of the genre, but I really loved it : ) Thanks, LLOYD

8/14/24, 4:49 AM
@[Lloyd311](/user/show/13481) Thanks so much! I'm very glad that you got into this story despite the softer tone I ended up going for. Means a lot c:
8/13/24, 8:22 PM
I loved this series a lot, and I think this ending is great. I'm glad that everyone got a happy ending especially Matt's dad. Though, I'm still curious about how the other tempters live, but I think your other stories give us a good glimpse.
8/13/24, 8:21 PM
Awesome story and the ending is amazing! I didnโ€™t mind at all the length of it. I canโ€™t to read the next chapters.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
8/13/24, 4:42 AM
Write more, please.
An On E Mus
8/12/24, 8:11 PM
So glad I stuck with this! More!!
8/9/24, 12:55 PM
Interesting concept. Might stick around and check out the future chapters. Looking forward to it.

8/12/24, 8:05 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) I hope you do! Thanks so much!
8/9/24, 3:37 PM
Hoo, now this is some _fascinating_ possession, combined with intriguing characters! I'm definitely gonna be watching this for more.

8/12/24, 8:05 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thanks so much!!! Hoping to cross post from Tumblr here more often!
8/9/24, 6:43 PM
That's really fun! And way hotter than expected. I didn't see the twist, but I appreciate the cute turn. Is there more to come?

8/12/24, 8:05 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Yes indeed! Chapter II should be coming out later this month!!