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8/16/24, 5:03 AM
I'll second eveningwill's comment that more popup notifications would be nice. GH ID 1292865
8/15/24, 11:11 PM
Wow, rubbrsome, this is incredible! It has a dizzying, dreamlike quality to it that I can only sum up as an "erotic nightmare." And there are so many unanswered questions: why do the doms all look alike? Where did this carnival come from? Are the men who become slaves in the carnival trapped there forever? I know you said this is a one-and-done story, but I think you could easily continue this if you wanted to.

8/15/24, 11:25 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Where did this Carnival come from? Are the slaves trapped? Why do the doms look alike? These are all excellent questions. And I'm really glad somebody is asking them. The story's been up for a few days, and you're the first to comment on the story's setting. I will tell you that I had a definite idea of what's happening here. I put clues to the setting all throughout the story. But at the same time, I also purposely left it vague and surreal. So like a dream, the story can be ambiguous and open to interpretation. But I would encourage you to approach the story as if it's NOT a dream. While the narrator does oscillate back and forth between dream and reality, he definitely (at the story's conclusion states that it's not a dream. So, if the story is not a dream, I would really like you tell me what you think is going on here? I really don't want to publicly share my interpretation. If I did, then I think it would limit the story. And the story could be much more fun if guys let their imaginations go wild, share their theories and answer those question you asked.
Anonymous
8/9/24, 9:42 PM
This is just a tour de force. Nothing on the site has compared to this chapter

8/15/24, 11:07 PM
@Anonymous Oh wow, thanks! This story isn't dead, but glad you liked this chapter so much.
AgentCoyner
8/15/24, 9:22 PM
This is wild and I'm absolutely loving it

8/15/24, 9:26 PM
@[AgentCoyner](/user/show/10008527) Dude thanks so much!! I’m having a blast writing it. It’s my first full multi chapter piece and I have a lot planned. :)
8/15/24, 5:58 PM
Thanks for a July that left me hot, horny, and panting for more in August! I enjoyed the calendar events a lot, especially July’s Orgy Days, and look forward to more! I’m already enjoying August’s Orgy Days’ Daily Missions and homepage backgrounds. One suggestion is that it would be nice for the pop-up stat notifications after completing an action (like defeating a Villain or advancing in the Current Quest) to note when we have gained Potions of Penetration (for Double Penetration) and cleared a task for Path of Attraction. That’s always helpful for the other Paths, and it would save some hopping back and forth between pages. Just a thought! Keep up the great work! GH ID: 1099323
8/12/24, 3:37 PM
Hey readers, you may have noticed that this story was kinda long. Despite its length, hopefully I was able to keep your attention in interest. And even more so, hopefully I got you to blow your load. That's always the reason I write these stories. Anyways, it was long because I always intended this story to be a "one off". Meaning that there are no more chapters to come. Everything I had to say regarding the main character is said. I have to thank three guys in helping me polish this idea. So a big heartfelt appreciation goes out to Sam, Hypnothrill and nycboot.

8/15/24, 8:25 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Man, you're crazy! This is like a 10k-word single-sex scene! Like one of those endless orgasms you're describing! A neverending flood of hotness! It just can't get any better!