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8/28/24, 1:04 AM
Cant wait for you to write another chapter
hairyartist
8/27/24, 11:42 AM
I love it thanks!

8/27/24, 8:49 PM
@[hairyartist](/user/show/10013526) thank you!! appreciate you reading!
8/27/24, 7:53 PM
Fucking brilliant. Great story with so many possibilities. Can hardly wait.
8/27/24, 3:31 PM
It's fascinating watching you slowly develop this, it's clear that you've put a lot of thought into this world as well as the characters. It's interesting seeing Ray dealing with his situation, how he's perceived by others as well as how he perceives himself. Even before the inanimate tf there's a lot going on here, like it was interesting seeing him being 'why aren't people talking to me when I'm A Jock now???' and finding it dissonant that Bryce was living in a dorm with Jocks. It's clear that his identity is something that he puts a lot of thought into and he has a fair bit tied up with the perception of being a Jock (as others do to be fair, based on how I'm interpreting the surprise at him being an engineering major). Ray is very lost in general and uni is a time of change even for those of us who weren't Daedalus students. Looking forward to seeing how he changes in all senses of the word and how things progress in general!
Anonymous
8/27/24, 4:26 AM
Great chapter hope for more wedgies and another chapter of this soon as it's amazing!!! Great work!!
8/26/24, 9:38 PM
"But I doubt itโ€™s for you yet", love that line! The plot thickens! And that ending!
8/26/24, 9:12 PM
This is hot, I hope some fingers find their way into Lance's tight fat butt at some point ๐Ÿ˜›
Anonymous
8/26/24, 3:00 PM
Yeppers way to go.