Recent Comments

8/30/24, 4:53 AM
I’m really loving this story. I’m following Ray and Nick as our main characters, but I’m kinda curious who the hell Victor is? I’m sure it’s been established in the story, but right near the end I want to know. Is he one of the freshmen? A senior? It’s kinda hits different depending on who it is. (And Tbh, I want him to be a freshman, because it’s hotter that he gambled and didn’t get that long before he became an object.)

8/30/24, 7:47 AM
@[KinkyNickInSea](/user/show/17305) He's one of the Daedalus freshmen, yes. I tried to sprinkle their names into the story every now and then instead of doing one big introduction round for everyone. Maybe I should have done that though, haha.

8/30/24, 8:29 AM
@[Cockatrice](/user/show/620105) oh, no need to do an introduction round. Perhaps just drop a little reminder near the end? “There stood a freshman, Victor, …”
8/30/24, 1:47 AM
Please, sir, I want some more.
Anonymous
8/29/24, 12:46 PM
Please, write another part
Anonymous
8/28/24, 7:30 AM
Great work!! Hope for more
8/28/24, 1:04 AM
Cant wait for you to write another chapter
hairyartist
8/27/24, 11:42 AM
I love it thanks!

8/27/24, 8:49 PM
@[hairyartist](/user/show/10013526) thank you!! appreciate you reading!
8/27/24, 7:53 PM
Fucking brilliant. Great story with so many possibilities. Can hardly wait.
8/27/24, 3:31 PM
It's fascinating watching you slowly develop this, it's clear that you've put a lot of thought into this world as well as the characters. It's interesting seeing Ray dealing with his situation, how he's perceived by others as well as how he perceives himself. Even before the inanimate tf there's a lot going on here, like it was interesting seeing him being 'why aren't people talking to me when I'm A Jock now???' and finding it dissonant that Bryce was living in a dorm with Jocks. It's clear that his identity is something that he puts a lot of thought into and he has a fair bit tied up with the perception of being a Jock (as others do to be fair, based on how I'm interpreting the surprise at him being an engineering major). Ray is very lost in general and uni is a time of change even for those of us who weren't Daedalus students. Looking forward to seeing how he changes in all senses of the word and how things progress in general!