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Jammes
11/19/24, 11:46 PM
GH 1114101 It just great.:slightly_smiling_face:
Zander
11/19/24, 11:16 PM
Very good chapter. The ending is very decent, but I would like to see an epilogue chapter, where all the men hypnotized by Ian remembered what he did to them and somehow took revenge on him. Ian could be a slave to each one in turn throughout his entire life and at the same time be conscious of everything that happens to him) And Jay gloated over him, fucking his boyfriend in front of Ian. Jay could erase people's memories of the equipment and use the device for mind control to fix people like Ian) Helping victims of hypnosis) and using it on villains by fucking them and turning them from Aggressors into victims, giving control over their minds to their former victims.
11/19/24, 7:37 PM
It was a bit 'too fast' even thou the story clearly stated that it took Jay years to get enough freedom to get out of the programming. I am liking how it progressed though. Thank you for posting
11/19/24, 5:27 PM
I love your work on CYOC and glad to see you publishing here now! Excited to see all the places you take us
11/19/24, 10:56 AM
A wonderful start! A nice cast of characters, you continue to accel at characterisation. Intrigued to see where the story goes!
11/19/24, 2:25 AM
Great idea. I wish the middle part came first, as it seemed out of place there and maybe better suited as a story starter. That's a personal preference. Otherwise, it's a good story overall.
11/17/24, 4:59 PM
This is so hot! More of this please🙏

11/18/24, 7:12 PM
@[Ben Lach](/user/show/10048028) I am glad you've enjoyed my story. Thank you for the feedback!
11/18/24, 6:06 PM
Loving this so much!
11/18/24, 8:32 AM
A very hot story.