Recent Comments

11/25/24, 9:16 PM
Really good start, looking forward to seeing more deflating escapades!

11/26/24, 6:49 AM
@[icandestroy](/user/show/914356) Thanks for the read. Ehh… I’ve written another bit with these two, but it’s all boring character development, it probably won’t ever see the light of day.
Nov 22, 2024
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11/24/24, 1:14 PM
Will there more like it cumming our way?

11/25/24, 3:44 PM
@gdlosh13@gmail.com Sorry, this story was a "one off". I have no ideas on how to further the narrative. Everything I wanted to tell happened to Sam. Probably the only thing left, and I think the reader would make this assumption is: as an influencer, Sam would've encouraged more men to visit this gym, and the process would repeat itself as each curious man entered its doors.
Nov 22, 2024
11/24/24, 6:02 AM
I also feel that some milky white shower gels/liquid soaps look like cum, especially those that claim "added musk". Of course, that refers to synthetic musk similar to the smell of deer musk, but sometimes I wonder what if it is "human musk"? Reading this story was so satisfying that I couldn't help but want to take a shower, lubricate and jerk off with musk soap.

11/25/24, 3:38 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) If you felt compelled to shower, lubricate and jerk off ... then your programming is perfectly installed and you are functioning as expected.
11/25/24, 2:42 PM
The pictures you put here with your excellent story are flawless. You definitely know what you’re writing about.
11/25/24, 2:40 PM
Fantastic, and oh wow!
11/25/24, 7:17 AM
Amazing chapter can't wait for more of this and your other stories.
Ben
11/25/24, 5:03 AM
This was super hot!! Loved it!!!
11/25/24, 1:56 AM
How can we make Jamie extremely hairy? He should get an mbp and grow that moustache into a huge walrus covering his whole mouth and chin…
11/25/24, 12:55 AM
Good job. Giving them "quests" to motivate them to do things they wouldn't normally and to get used to their new "roles" is very clever and makes the changes in personality and actions feel much more natural. More like they're doing the changes to themselves instead of having them imposed on them by the game. The fact that the two are also taking completely different paths adds some variety, and my guess is Alvis will end up going down the Int pathway. Excited for chapter 2. Keep up the good work.
11/24/24, 9:07 PM
I'm shocked that there aren't any comments yet! This story is really good and I'm looking forward to what's to come. Now I have to go back and look at your other series.

11/24/24, 9:23 PM
@[HimboPup](/user/show/10011980) Thank you that's very kind. They'll slot together so you will see plenty of cross over characters. As to why there are not many comments, pass. But I only started writing them last month for the Halloween challenge maybe it takes awhile for readers to commit to reading longer more character driven stories and new writers to learn what the audience wants. Plus this one only went uo a few days ago :blush: