Recent Comments

11/5/24, 1:05 AM
This story keeps getting better and better. The layers that get revealed with each chapter are fantastic.

11/5/24, 1:07 AM
@[Deej](/user/show/1464168) Thank you! This chapter was harder to write than I expected and I had to revise it several times until it worked. So the next part is still being worked on. Thanks for reading the story so far.
10/28/24, 1:41 AM
Me encanta esta historia! Son necesarios maaaas capitulos 🔥

11/4/24, 8:35 AM
@[Pharashion](/user/show/10021065) Hola, quería agradecer por tu comentario, realmente es una motivación para mí en continuar con la historia. Será una osadía pero espero no te sienta mal que use esta respuesta para explicar algunas cosas. Primero hay muchos más capítulos en proceso, ya algunos están casi completos pero ninguno al 100% todavía. Faltan afinar detalles, pero sin duda estarán llenos de chicos con culos gordos y necesitados. Segundo con respecto a los capítulos publicados pienso afinar ortografía y colocar algunas escenas lascivas que al volver a leer me gustaría incorporar. Y como último un pequeño spoiler del capítulo que espero pronto esté listo, tratara sobre los gemelos Axel y Alex y nuestro prota, los tres estarán practicando en una obra de teatro donde una poción con efectos especiales que tiene el prota hará de las suyas... además Liam tiene ganas de recuperar el plug anal que le enterró el prota, es muy importante para él, ¿que tendrá que ver Oliver en todo esto? Esperemos sus nalgas no estén de por medio. De nuevo gracias por ese mensaje, me alienta a seguir escribiendo. :writing_hand: :penguin:
Anonymous
11/3/24, 7:06 PM
This series is so hot!
Izzy
11/1/24, 6:16 AM
Looking forward to more of this story!

Anonymous
11/3/24, 9:34 AM
@[Izzy](/user/show/10012873) Thank you!!! The rest is posted to my patreon. It's free!!!
10/27/24, 5:53 PM
Hot story.

11/2/24, 1:51 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you!
11/2/24, 11:20 AM
What a hot opening chapter !!!!
Anonymous
10/30/24, 11:09 PM
I feel like the other Jock/Bully should’ve gotten a wedgie. You know, twist things and make Lance, the one who is supposed to give nerds wedgies, give the other Jocks humiliating wedgies. Using his potential on the people who expect it the least. Otherwise, I love the livestock. Very well done :)
10/30/24, 9:59 AM
Perfect story ! Your writing is brillant

10/30/24, 10:51 AM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) Thank you so much! That means a lot!
Anonymous
10/29/24, 3:58 PM
Great chapter
10/2/24, 6:04 PM
As readers, it's rare we're treated to something so sophisticated and well-written. A lot of times, multi-part stories aren't really thought out in terms of story arcs and character development. As I've said a million times before, it's usually "Then the same thing happens to Bob" for however many chapters keeps the author's attention. Rock Creek Werewolf -- who I know as a friend and biking companion (and who fills out his spandex well) -- you have done the nearly impossible: you've made me like werewolves. Well done -- I'M PROUD OF YOU. You should seriously consider publishing this via amazon.

10/29/24, 10:59 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) I'm going to echo Absman, here. This is one of the best stories I have read on this site, period: the plot is engaging, the sexy is blisteringly hot, the mind control elements are kinky and varied (Hypnotic musk? Yes, please!), and makes me reconsider some things about myself (Okay, maybe I *am* into watersports!). The characters are all fun, their dynamics are varied, and there's even plenty of humor. In truth, it reminds me a hell of a lot of one of his own stories- and as someone who holds Absman up as a paragon of mind control and muscle growth erotica, that is high, HIGH praise! You got me emotionally invested, and now I can't wait to see what happens next!

10/29/24, 2:56 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Thank you for the very kind feedback. It is very much treasured. I’m glad to know this said appealing to at least a few people, & not just being tossed out into the void I appreciated. I sent you a DM. Each for add’l feedback.