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12/18/25, 11:23 AM
Only complaint wish we went slower especially as recollection to others skips, especially with implied inductions could work But that's a nitpick. Thus is hooooot The date. The kitchen, garage scene. The characters distinction and lives. Their assumptions and anxieties. Interesting how kid himself arguably his first victim seeing how easily charmed by good cop and denied daddy issues. Plus hint been using or setup by others (therapist)
Dec 15, 2025
12/18/25, 6:38 AM
I need to see more from this world. Love it.
12/18/25, 1:15 AM
This story amazingly captures those feelings of unrequited love we've all felt as teens. The descriptions are rich and vivid, like how the drone feels and smells, the glide of the rubber ring. Slow, teasing buildup, Haru's shame, shy glances, until it builds to intense sex scenes. We feel Souta's voice, lust, self-loathing, jealousy, heartbreak, strong internal conflict. The dystopian world remains subtle, draft and drones woven in naturally. The rubber drone is a perfect sex object and the contrast with our own human imperfections is a great theme: how can we even begin to compare to something so physically perfect? The rejection is strongly felt, and it stings so much when Haru realizes it's not even because of Souta's orientation. Sharp contrast between Haru's small, sensitive presence and the drone's towering apathy, also between Souta's projected casual straightness and the fact that he's fucking a male-shaped machine. Deeply kinky with genuine emotional depth.
Dec 15, 2025
12/16/25, 7:19 AM
Holy fucking fuck that was a hot one! You took a classic concept and yet it unique and fresh. The sex scenes were amazing and the ending was *chef's kiss*. This is one of those stories where I want more but at the same time it is perfect as it is. You know what? Scratch that. I **definitely** need more of that. I loved the giving in to tops and their constant competition between themselves, especially when in the end everything was good and happy.

12/16/25, 3:49 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Thank you! TBD if I write another one, but nice comments like this make me want to!

12/17/25, 6:56 PM
@[Max Lode](/user/show/338113) Very well done! I hope you do write another because you can't leave a cliffhanger like that lol. I'm curious the relationship between Bryce and his uncle, if it's a rivalry of sorts, a bet that nothing would break Luke to have sex with another.
12/13/25, 4:50 PM
Dude, Another great chapter, as was the one before this and the one before that, etc... hahaha. The psychological and physical games Noah plays with Liam are amazing and hot and sometimes hilarious to watch. Will getting fucked be a turning point for Liam? Might be hot to see him make a stand to gain back control only to get tripped up and stuck tighter in Noah's web. :muscle:

12/17/25, 5:20 PM
@[Muscle-Flex-1](/user/show/2059714) yeah man the storys main theme is emotional and psychological manipulation! im thrilled ure enjoying it srsly!! you might actually like noahs pov too!
12/16/25, 6:09 PM
The transformations are soooo hot! I hope there'd be an "Another Eve of Becoming" story too just like Curse of Entity! ❤️

12/17/25, 3:20 PM
@[srrecca](/user/show/10059619) Possibly! The spirit moved on due to being able to bring happiness. That doesn’t mean that another spirit can’t do the same. :wink:

12/17/25, 4:08 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) OMG please do so, I'm so looking forward to it! I love your stories so much 🤩

12/17/25, 5:06 PM
@[srrecca](/user/show/10059619) Thank you! I’m working on another chapter of do as you’re told. Called “A New Kind of Basic Training.”
12/16/25, 7:30 PM
A very cute read! I’m curious to see how things will develop with the couple and their interspecies relationship!
12/16/25, 2:14 AM
Soren, this story is starting to get really good! Super fun, sexy, and loaded with characterization and story. And usually, I get kind of lost in action/fight scenes, but I was able to follow this one easily, which made it really enjoyable. That scene with Chase lifting off River's cock was like a bomb scene or something, haha, really campy but fun! Great work!

12/16/25, 2:08 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) @[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Yeah, Time hammered it into me that fights needed to be clear, concise, not overly detailed or complicated, and focused on the feelings of the characters, and I think my fights in this story are much improved for it. Heh, and, yeah, I heavily indulged in that ‘pulling off his cock’ scene—I thought it was hot when writing it, and I think it gives some fun suspense! Glad you’re enjoying the characters still; they’ve got quite the adventure ahead of them.
12/6/25, 6:18 AM
Hey, I'm enjoying the series and am always looking forward to the next chapters of this thrilling story. But I'm writing this because I wanted to thank you for introducing me to RSD. I have a close friend who is autistic and has ADHD (I myself am both of these too), but he used to have regular spirals of depression and self-loathing that I wasn't able to understand or connect with him to despite his life accomplishments, and the things I did that I thought would help instead ended up putting him in a worse position and made me feel guilty and at a loss for words. It was only after reading this series that I realised that this was a known condition and I finally understood how RSD manifests in a person's thoughts and interactions with others. After reading more about it and suspecting that this would explain his situation, I brought it up with him and he confirmed that he knew about it through his therapist but never told anyone else (he apparently claimed he told me, but either he dreamt that up or I forgot entirely, which are both equally possible lol). So thank you! He seems to be doing much better now (not only because of this, of course) and I have been able to understand him better and provide him the appropriate support in difficult situations. ♥️

12/6/25, 6:23 AM
@[hunterlism](/user/show/10060533) Oh my God, this comment made me tear up. This is one of the best things that has ever happened as the result of my writing. I am _**so**_ happy for you and your friend! You are so welcome, and if you need any more help navigating RSD, please feel free to DM me. Take care! ♥️

12/16/25, 11:15 AM
@[Travis Ramsey](/user/show/10050627) Thank you for the kind words! I will keep your offer in mind!🫂❤️ By the way, could you confirm that it is you who sent me a message on another platform? No problem with that, just doing my due diligence since you never really know these days.

12/16/25, 11:30 AM
@[hunterlism](/user/show/10060533) Yes, that was me!
12/7/25, 9:29 AM
GH ID 1292865 I'll concur with a Thor's observation that drop rates seem to have decreased recently. With raids i never figured I'd go from 0 to 100 shards in a single raid, but these days it seems like a given raid on a troll will only net a handful of shards even with committing all the fists available over the course of the raid. I haven't noticed any particular issue with the drop rates in Seasons (and I honestly don't bother with those on champions).

12/16/25, 10:42 AM
@[AarrowOM](/user/show/13926) Thanks for your feedback. Drop rates for raids can feel lower recently, as the system is designed to be gradual and challenging. Seasons haven’t changed, so shard drops there remain consistent. We understand it can be frustrating at times. Please accept the gift we’ve added to your account as a small gesture from our side. <3