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12/19/25, 6:30 PM
Amazing! I’m really loving this flashback story going along with the present time story. As ur other works this is pretty well done
12/19/25, 3:37 PM
Very good twist. Love where this is going. Can't wait for more.
12/18/25, 2:05 AM
Oh boy did this chapter not shape up the way I was expecting. From the first couple of scenes I was fully expecting that Haru was going to pretend to be a drone to seduce Souta or that Souta's personal drone was going to be revealed to be Haru's brother Hayato. I never expected Haru was going to end up going to the system himself. My heart breaks for Haru's father, he's lost his only family and now he's all alone in the world. Looking forward to seeing how this story develops. What will Haru experience in the system, will he be reunited with Hayato, will he ever get to confess his love to Souta? So many questions.

12/19/25, 7:46 AM
@[phillipsm](/user/show/919402) Well, I love to surprise :) ITO-K and I are having a blast writing that series. ITO-K's chapter will be up tomorrow. Haru's fate will be on the line. He has to be careful what he wishes for!
12/18/25, 11:23 AM
Only complaint wish we went slower especially as recollection to others skips, especially with implied inductions could work But that's a nitpick. Thus is hooooot The date. The kitchen, garage scene. The characters distinction and lives. Their assumptions and anxieties. Interesting how kid himself arguably his first victim seeing how easily charmed by good cop and denied daddy issues. Plus hint been using or setup by others (therapist)
Dec 15, 2025
12/18/25, 6:38 AM
I need to see more from this world. Love it.
12/18/25, 1:15 AM
This story amazingly captures those feelings of unrequited love we've all felt as teens. The descriptions are rich and vivid, like how the drone feels and smells, the glide of the rubber ring. Slow, teasing buildup, Haru's shame, shy glances, until it builds to intense sex scenes. We feel Souta's voice, lust, self-loathing, jealousy, heartbreak, strong internal conflict. The dystopian world remains subtle, draft and drones woven in naturally. The rubber drone is a perfect sex object and the contrast with our own human imperfections is a great theme: how can we even begin to compare to something so physically perfect? The rejection is strongly felt, and it stings so much when Haru realizes it's not even because of Souta's orientation. Sharp contrast between Haru's small, sensitive presence and the drone's towering apathy, also between Souta's projected casual straightness and the fact that he's fucking a male-shaped machine. Deeply kinky with genuine emotional depth.
Dec 15, 2025
12/16/25, 7:19 AM
Holy fucking fuck that was a hot one! You took a classic concept and yet it unique and fresh. The sex scenes were amazing and the ending was *chef's kiss*. This is one of those stories where I want more but at the same time it is perfect as it is. You know what? Scratch that. I **definitely** need more of that. I loved the giving in to tops and their constant competition between themselves, especially when in the end everything was good and happy.

12/16/25, 3:49 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Thank you! TBD if I write another one, but nice comments like this make me want to!

12/17/25, 6:56 PM
@[Max Lode](/user/show/338113) Very well done! I hope you do write another because you can't leave a cliffhanger like that lol. I'm curious the relationship between Bryce and his uncle, if it's a rivalry of sorts, a bet that nothing would break Luke to have sex with another.
12/13/25, 4:50 PM
Dude, Another great chapter, as was the one before this and the one before that, etc... hahaha. The psychological and physical games Noah plays with Liam are amazing and hot and sometimes hilarious to watch. Will getting fucked be a turning point for Liam? Might be hot to see him make a stand to gain back control only to get tripped up and stuck tighter in Noah's web. :muscle:

12/17/25, 5:20 PM
@[Muscle-Flex-1](/user/show/2059714) yeah man the storys main theme is emotional and psychological manipulation! im thrilled ure enjoying it srsly!! you might actually like noahs pov too!
12/16/25, 6:09 PM
The transformations are soooo hot! I hope there'd be an "Another Eve of Becoming" story too just like Curse of Entity! ❤️

12/17/25, 3:20 PM
@[srrecca](/user/show/10059619) Possibly! The spirit moved on due to being able to bring happiness. That doesn’t mean that another spirit can’t do the same. :wink:

12/17/25, 4:08 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) OMG please do so, I'm so looking forward to it! I love your stories so much 🤩

12/17/25, 5:06 PM
@[srrecca](/user/show/10059619) Thank you! I’m working on another chapter of do as you’re told. Called “A New Kind of Basic Training.”
12/16/25, 7:30 PM
A very cute read! I’m curious to see how things will develop with the couple and their interspecies relationship!