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Nov 22, 2024
11/21/24, 11:36 PM
Okay ... I should say that this story was unexpected. It came about because when I was at the gym this morning, I took a shower after my workout. And in the shower, I couldn't help but notice that the soap that's provided by the gym, and coming out of the wall-mounted dispenser, looked really similar to cum. Well that just got my mind going. What if this is cum? What if I'm lathering up in other men's cum? Well, I got home and started writing. Did I know Sam was going to be a social media influencer? Nope. That just seemed to happen as I wrote it. But somehow, that created the idea of these camera pillars that would give adrenaline boosts to the workouts. Weird ... I had no idea where that came from. Anyways, I guess what I'm saying is .... I don't know where this story came from. All I had was an idea for cum-filled soap dispenser, and next thing I know, I churned out a story that I hadn't planned in the least. So there's probably continuity errors that make no sense, probably a lot of questions that I really don't have answers to. And no, I don't plan on writing another chapter. But if any of you guys want to add onto this story, please be my guest. And please please, if any of you guys are rich and think of opening your own gym that has cum-filled soap dispensers .... please extend me a membership.

11/22/24, 7:19 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) I love this story precisely because it has a dream-like intensity and doesn't get too bogged down in exposition. It's packing a lot of powerful images--the white teeth, the moment where Marshall rubs his cum into Sam's dick, etc--into a short story, and I love the notion of the selfie-taking pillars delivering a boost of adrenaline and testosterone every time the picture is snapped. Great work!

11/22/24, 7:38 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) I think you're right, Hypnothrill. It very much so has a dream-like quality. When writing, I really was getting into the fluid exchange. The visual images of rubbing your cum onto another guy, they rubbing their cum onto you. And all that fluid exchange causing the men to lose both their inhibitions and self-control, furthering them into a heightened state of orgasmic bliss. Geez ... I'm getting hard now just thinking about it. Thank you for reading. Now, when can I read your next story? Seriously ... I feel I'm not the only guy anxiously awaiting the next Hypnothrill fantasy.
Nov 19, 2024
11/21/24, 6:14 AM
This is a great start! I’m excited to see where it goes

11/22/24, 3:33 PM
@[Chnops](/user/show/10012918) Thanks! I have an idea of what I want to explore - namely, a relationship with a younger straight person that, while not traditionally romantic, and fueled by lust (that is not reciprocated), can actually enhance the life of both parties.
11/22/24, 1:30 PM
Very enjoyable start

11/22/24, 2:11 PM
@[OrangeBear](/user/show/10002019) Thank you, Orange Bear
Nov 22, 2024
11/22/24, 2:01 PM
Very hot story! And welcome back to writing! XD
Anonymous
11/22/24, 1:58 PM
God this was so hot, so excited to read more!
11/22/24, 12:34 PM
I read this all in one go and it was fantastic! I like the buildup to the double fuck. The manipulation and diversionary tactics like shoving his face in a pit; so hot and deliciously evil! Fabulous Double Daddy seduction/induction!
11/20/24, 6:30 PM
Good start! Love the overdrawn main character. Lots of potential here for dumb jocks getting off in...unfortunate circumstances!

11/22/24, 7:48 AM
@[dumbjockhunter](/user/show/10025609) Thanks! And yeah... my goal in writing this is to build on that trope but with a "realistic" tilt, although still unconstrained by reality, if that makes sense. Glad you liked the PoV character as he's a bit controversial :D
Vester
11/21/24, 10:09 PM
Least horny DND session lol. I really liked it though.